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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Kyou wa ame ga futteimasu. Ano onna ni wa kasa to renko-to wa hitsuyou nan desu.

Kinou yuki ga futteimasu kara, watashi wa mafura wo shiteimashita.

Ashita wa hareteimasu kara, sangurasu wo motte kimasu.

Doyoubi ga yuki wo futte kara, boushi wo kabutteimasu.

Ototoi wa ame kara kasa wo sashiteimashita.
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  • Yuzo Usami
    Mochapoints: 10055  |  Teacher Score: 7528 (100%)

    Kinou yuki ga futteimasu kara, watashi wa mafura wo shiteimashita.

    -> Kinou yuki ga futta node watashi wa mafura wo shimashita.

     Ashita wa hareteimasu kara, sangurasu wo motte kimasu.

    -> Ahita wa hareru kara, sangurasu wo motte kimasu.

    Doyoubi ga yuki wo futte kara, boushi wo kabutteimasu.

    -> Doyoubi wa yuki ga futta kara, boushi wo kaburimashita.

    Ototoi wa ame kara kasa wo sashiteimashita.

    -> Ototoi wa ame datta kara, kasa wo sashimashita.

     

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  • x
    Mochapoints: 11803  |  Teacher Score: 1113 (0%)

    Kyou wa ame ga futteimasu. Ano onna(onna no hito or jyosei is better) ni wa kasa to renko-to reinko-to wa ga hitsuyou nan desu. Kinou yuki ga futteimasu futta  kara , watashi wa mafura wo shiteimashita. Ashita wa hareteimasu hareru kara, sangurasu wo motte kimasu. Doyoubi ga wa yuki wo ga futte futta kara, boushi wo kabutteimasu kaburimashita or kabutteimashita. Ototoi wa ame datta kara kasa wo sashiteimashita.

    Very good(^^)v

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  • hani
    Mochapoints: 3517  |  Teacher Score: 823 (100%)

    Arigatou =)

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  • wo.ow
    Mochapoints: 8733  |  Teacher Score: 2705 (100%)

    Kyou wa ame ga futteimasu. Ano onna ni wa kasa to reinko-to wa ga hitsuyou nan desu. Kinou yuki ga futteimasu karaita node, watashi wa mafura wo shiteimashita. Ashita wa hareteimasuru you dakara, sangurasu wo motte kimasu. Doyoubi ga wa yuki wo ga futte ita kara, boushi wo kabutteimasu shita. (Doyoubi wa yuki ga furu you nanode boushi wo kabutte ikou to omoi masu)Ototoi wa ame datta kara , kasa wo sashiteimashita.

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  • mujahid
    Mochapoints: 5262  |  Teacher Score: 4584

    Kyou wa ame ga futteimasu. Ano onna ni wa kasa to reinko-to wa ga hitsuyou nan desu. Kinou yuki ga futteimasu karaita node, watashi wa mafura wo shiteimashita. Ashita wa hareteimasuru you dakara, sangurasu wo motte kimasu. Doyoubi ga wa yuki wo ga futte ita kara, boushi wo kabutteimasu shita. (Doyoubi wa yuki ga furu you nanode boushi wo kabutte ikou to omoi masu)Ototoi wa ame datta kara , kasa wo sashiteimashita

    Submitted over a year ago

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