Login with Facebook
Forgot your password? I do not have an account
Your information will be remembered for 2 weeks only.

Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

Sergio Ricardo's submission: Average Rating:
これらの家は赤くありません。青いです。
これの車とトラックは白いです。黒くありません。
これの女と女の子です。男と男の子じゃありません。
私たちは男です。女じゃありません。
あなたたちは女の子じゃありません。男の子です。
これの女と女の子はやせています。太っていません。
Submitted over a year ago

Please Login to Review this Submission

Login



Reviews

  • mari y.shiomi
    Mochapoints: 1895  |  Teacher Score: 32 (0%)

    Sergio:Algumas correções:

    Kono ie wa akaku arimasen, ao desu.

    Kono kuruma to track wa shirodesu, kuroku arimasen.

    kono hitotati wa jyosei to onna no ko desu.

    Na última frase: ano  jyosei  to onnaa no ko wa yasete imassu...

    Submitted over a year ago
    Translate
  • Akira_JP
    Mochapoints: 160286  |  Teacher Score: 129436 (100%)

    自分のことを「私は男です」。「私は女です」と言ってもようですが、人のことを「男」「女」というのはとても失礼な印象になります。

    It is OK to use just "otoko" or "onna" for decscribing yourself, but it sounds very rude and gives bad impressions when it is used for describing others. Use "otokonohito or dansei", "onnanohito or josei".

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:
  • Akira_JP
    Mochapoints: 160286  |  Teacher Score: 129436 (100%)

    言ってもようー>言ってもよい

    sorry of the typo

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Toyohiko Nakaga...
    Mochapoints: 1738  |  Teacher Score: 363 (100%)

    この車とトラックは白いです。

    この女と女の子。 

    です。

    Submitted over a year ago
    Spelling:
    Proficiency:
    Grammar:

Tips for Good Reviews:

Be Specific
  • Give useful suggestions and examples.
  • Write more than just brief comments like “Good job” or “Needs work".
Make Corrections
  • Use the editing features to apply strikethrough, bold or different font colors.
  • Use the virtual keyboard to insert special characters in your reviews.
Teach by Example
  • Review a speaking exercise by recording your own audio comment.
  • Focus on correct pronunciation and speaking patterns.