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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

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Getsuyoubi ni ame ga futte imashita. Kayoubi mo ame ga futte imashita. Kyou wa ame ga futte inaide harete imasu. Yuki wa futte imasu kara kare ga kasa wo sashite imasu. Atsui desu kara boushi wo kabutte imasen.
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  • Rob Matsumoto
    Mochapoints: 2436  |  Teacher Score: 350 (0%)

    Well done!

     

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  • Rob Matsumoto
    Mochapoints: 2436  |  Teacher Score: 350 (0%)

    You could use:"Yuki wa futte imasu kara kare wa kasa wo sashite imasu."

    OK?

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  • Rob Matsumoto
    Mochapoints: 2436  |  Teacher Score: 350 (0%)

    Sorry....the correct was:"Yuki ga futte imasu kara kare wa kasa wo sashite imasu."

     

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  • Aliss
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    Thanks

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  • Lollipop
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    ~Excellent~

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