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Japanese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

Victoria's submission: Average Rating:
男の人は年を取っています

女の子は背が低いです

男の子は太っています

女の人は金持ちです

あなたは背が高いです

私は女です
Submitted over a year ago

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  • ts
    Mochapoints: 8328  |  Teacher Score: 6344 (96%)
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    Mochapoints: 8328  |  Teacher Score: 6344 (96%)
    Right! You are doing great!better than my poor English. Also it is right how to use Kanji. 男の人は、年を取っています。 女の子は、背が低いです。 '　、　'　'　。　’　　OK?
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  • nekosama
    Mochapoints: 1371  |  Teacher Score: 500 (100%)
    Almost perfect!! Just one thing: We put a period “。” at the end of a sentence, which is the same as English!. (I think…umm…a comma “、” is not needed in such a short sentence. >ts comment) がんばってくださいね。b
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  • Victoria
    Mochapoints: 576  |  Teacher Score: 55 (0%)
    Thank you both for your comments on my submission! I shall work hard on my punctuation :)
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