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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

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zhè gè nán rén yào qù mǎi chē. zhè gè nǚ rén zài xiě zi.
zhè gè nán hái zài dú shū. zhè gè nǚ hái yào qù wán shuǎ.
nǐ yào qù kàn bào.

我 不 去 工 做。我 累 了。我 在 听 音 乐。
你 要 去 做 什 么 ?

谢 谢
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  • Lola
    Mochapoints: 7597  |  Teacher Score: 3832
    Well done! Just one: “工作”而不是“工做”。 我打算去看英文电影,有什么好建议吗?
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  • ccf
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    很好
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  • Laura
    Mochapoints: 1099  |  Teacher Score: 67 (0%)
    very good there is a minor mistake 工做 should be 工作
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  • 卅卅
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    非常好.
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  • Katherine
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    very good! zhè gè nán rén yào qù mǎi chē. zhè gè nǚ rén zài xiě zi. zhè gè nán hái zài dú shū. zhè gè nǚ hái yào qù wán shuǎ. nǐ yào qù kàn bào. 我 不 去 工 作。我 累 了。我 在 听 音 乐。你 要 去 做 什 么 ? 谢 谢
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  • Ivy
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    拼音写的非常好~ 下面写的汉字也很好~ excellent!!
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  • holly
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    The woman is walking on the street. These men are playing games. The boy is taking picture of the bridge. I am talking to you, but you are not visible. I am writing to you and you are reading my letters.
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  • Ruth
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    我 不 去 工 "做"-我 不 去 工 作 mǎi -mai/nǚ-nan/shuǎ-shua/nǐ-ni Good .
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  • 450926273
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    “工作”而不是工做
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  • 450926273
    Mochapoints: 2574  |  Teacher Score: 96 (0%)
    “工作”而不是工做
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  • Laura
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    工做->工作
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  • miss li
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    good
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  • zsd
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    Your pingyin is better to me!
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  • xiaoxia
    Mochapoints: 1504  |  Teacher Score: 104 (0%)
    zhèi gè nán rén yào qù mǎi chē. zhèi gè nǚ rén zài xiě zi. zhèi gè nán hái zài dú shū. zhè gè nan hái yào qù wán shuǎ. nǐ yào qù kàn bào.
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  • lynn
    Mochapoints: 557  |  Teacher Score: 69 (0%)
    Very good!
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  • 燕子
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    拼写的音调很正确,不过出现个别的错别字,应该是"工作",而不是"工做"
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  • lulu琛
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    我不去工“作”
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  • Jamie Li
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    zhè gè nán rén yào qù mǎi chē. zhè gè nǚ rén (zheng) zài xiě zi. zhè gè nán hái (zheng) zài dú shū. zhè gè nǚ hái yào qù wán shuǎ. nǐ yào qù kàn bào. 我 不 去 工 做。我 累 了。我 (正) 在 听 音 乐。你 要 去 做 什 么 ? 谢 谢 Good job!
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  • mmyfl
    Mochapoints: 10236  |  Teacher Score: 3186 (98%)
    这个男人要去买车。这个女人在写字。这个男孩在读书。这个女孩要去玩耍。你要去看报。我不去工(作)。我累了。我在听音乐。你要去做什么?谢谢。 You've done a great job. Keep up the good work.
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  • irene21mo
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    工"作"^^
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  • nono
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    very good!
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  • May
    Mochapoints: 186  |  Teacher Score: 27 (0%)
    很好
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  • cynthia
    Mochapoints: 3268  |  Teacher Score: 315 (0%)
    非常好的!!语法和音调完全正确!!
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  • 七太阳
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    zhè gè nán rén yào qù mǎi chē. (mai) zhè gè nǚ rén zài xiě zi. (v) zhè gè nǚ hái yào qù wán shuǎ. (v) (shua) 太好了,good
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  • joe
    Mochapoints: 902  |  Teacher Score: 41 (0%)
    "我不去工做"应该为"我不去工作"
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  • ljl
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    zhe ge nu ren zai xie zhu(助).工作
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  • MsIris
    Mochapoints: 5458  |  Teacher Score: 377 (0%)
    well done! The only error of that Chinese character has been pointed out by others.
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  • Juli
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  • 曾理佳
    Mochapoints: 501  |  Teacher Score: 76
    工 做 No ~ 工作 yes very good !
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  • heshanshan
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  • LadyRose
    Mochapoints: 23348  |  Teacher Score: 15339 (100%)
    Wow, so many comments. "Dankeschön" 谢 谢 for your help.
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  • GiaZhao
    Mochapoints: 350  |  Teacher Score: 27 (0%)
    Too strong
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  • Rose
    Mochapoints: 883  |  Teacher Score: 167 (0%)
    as Star mentioned,工做is not correct,you should say 工作。 well done,keep trying!
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  • Rose
    Mochapoints: 883  |  Teacher Score: 167 (0%)
    as Star mentioned,工做is not correct,you should say 工作。 well done,keep trying!
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  • helen
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    Good job! Pay attention to punctuation between sentences. 我不去工作,我累了。(The end of the sentence doesn't use a comma,full stop the use of the end of the sentence.)
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  • 微蘫
    Mochapoints: 199  |  Teacher Score: 26 (0%)
    拼音正确 很好
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  • Benjamin
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    Sehr gut! 加油~
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  • ljl
    Mochapoints: 3905  |  Teacher Score: 284 (0%)
    这个男人要去卖车,这个女人在歇着,这个男孩在读书,这个女孩要去玩耍,你要去看报。我不去工作,我累了。我在听音乐。你要去做什么?谢谢!歇着的‘着’汉语拼音不对。应该是zhe。在汉语里它是多音字,很多地方都用得着。
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  • Eco Zhang
    Mochapoints: 3547  |  Teacher Score: 860 (100%)

    工作

    great one.

    actually i can tell that you do have mastered the tones in pinyin. well i think that is the hardese part. you've done a great job.

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