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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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xiàn zài shì liù diǎn zhōng. zhè gè nán rén zài shuì jiào.
xiàn zài shì qī diǎn yí kè. zhè gè nǚ rén zài gōng zuò.
hái bú dǎo liǎng diǎn. wǒ yào qù mǎi yùn dòng shān.

Which is correct: nán hái men shì diǎn bān chī fàn. or: nán hái men chī fàn shì diǎn bān. ??? Or something else?

现 在 几 点 了 ? 现 在 是 四 点 十 五 分。 我 在 读 书。我 要 去 写 字。

谢 谢。
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  • xiaoxu
    Mochapoints: 10250  |  Teacher Score: 1834 (97%)
    'si dian ban' not 'shi dian ban' 'nan hai men si dian ban chi fan'is right. very well,加油!
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  • xiaoxu
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    'si dian ban' not 'shi dian ban' 'nan hai men si dian ban chi fan'is right. very well,加油!
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  • xiaoxu
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    ni hao ,ni fei chang ren zhen,ji xu nu li! hello ,you are very earntst,continue with your studies.
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  • 刘威
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    nan hai men shi diao ban chi fan.or:nan hai men chi fan shi diao ban .男孩们是调班吃饭。男孩们吃饭是调班。Two sentences can be.However, the first sentence better.There are small problems."diao"=“调”not of "dian" Good work!
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  • 刘威
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    I am sorry, I did not note that the second sentence is not correct.
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  • Lola
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    Well done! hái bú dào liǎng diǎn. sì diǎn bān nán hái men zài chī fàn. 很棒！加油！
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  • helen
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    现在是六点钟，这个男人在睡觉。现在是七点一刻，这个女人在工作。还不到两点，我要去买运动衫。男孩们四点半吃饭。（nan hai men si dian ban chi fan）。 Great！
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  • LadyRose
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    谢 谢 - thank you, my dear teachers.
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  • young
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    nan hai men shi si dian ban chi fan or nan hai men chi fan shi si dian ban.These two setence are all right.But the emphasizing is different.
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  • cyberman
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    Sehr gut!! Alle hatten gesagt worden. Nicht mehr zu empfehlen.
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  • wishes
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    shi dian =at ten o'clock si dian=at four o'clock very good, jia you
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  • Renee
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    nán hái men shi2(十) diǎn ban4 chī fàn. --lunch nán hái men si(四) diǎn ban4 chī fàn. --dinner
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  • gigi
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    nán hái men shì diǎn bān chī fàn. "shi"ying gai shi "si"
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  • 瑾jin
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    "nan hai men si dian ban chi fan"is correct. 四点 "si dian" not "shi dian " Your Chinese is very good. o(∩_∩)o...
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  • 刘莹
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    good!very good! the only wrongs are: hái bú (dǎo->dào) liǎng diǎn nán hái men (shì->sì) diǎn( bān->bàn) chī fàn. the whole passage is ： 现在是六点钟。这个男人在睡觉。现在是七点一刻。这个女人在工作。还不到两点。我要去买运动衫。男孩们四点半吃饭。
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  • nena
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    Good, you have some good comments. Good luck!
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