Describing the weather
Instructions:
Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3
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jīn tiàn zhèng zài xià yǔ. zhè gè nán rén dǎ zhe yì bǎ sǎn.
nǚ rén dài zhe tài yáng jìng, yīn weì yáng guāng hěn cì yǎn.
zuò tiàn tiàn qì yóu diǎn lěng. nán hái men dái zhe mào zi. tā men dái zhe tòu jīn, yīn weì zhèng zài xià xuě.
nǐ weì shén me dài zhe yǔ yī ? yīn weì zhèng zài xià yǔ.
今 天 天 气 有 点 冷。我 戴 着 运 动 衫 ，帽 子 和 头 巾。
谢 谢.
nǚ rén dài zhe tài yáng jìng, yīn weì yáng guāng hěn cì yǎn.
zuò tiàn tiàn qì yóu diǎn lěng. nán hái men dái zhe mào zi. tā men dái zhe tòu jīn, yīn weì zhèng zài xià xuě.
nǐ weì shén me dài zhe yǔ yī ? yīn weì zhèng zài xià yǔ.
今 天 天 气 有 点 冷。我 戴 着 运 动 衫 ，帽 子 和 头 巾。
谢 谢.
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今 天 天 气 有 点 冷。我 穿 着 运 动 衫 ，戴 着帽 子 和 围 着 头 巾。 谢 谢.
jīn tiàn zhèng zài xià yǔ. zhè gè nán rén dǎ zhe yì bǎ sǎn. nǚ rén dài zhe tài yáng jìng, yīn weì yáng guāng hěn cì yǎn. zuò tiàn tiàn qì yóu diǎn lěng. nán hái men dái zhe mào zi. tā men dái zhe tòu jīn, yīn weì zhèng zài xià xuě. nǐ weì shén me dài zhe yǔ yī ? yīn weì zhèng zài xià yǔ. 今 天 天 气 有 点 冷。我 戴 着 运 动 衫 ，帽 子 和 头 巾。 谢 谢.
1. zhè gè nán rén ""dǎ"" zhe yì bǎ sǎn.
do you mean "dai4"? (bring)
2. zuò tiàn > zuo2tian1
3. nán hái men "dái" zhe mào zi.
dái > dai4
4. tā men dái zhe tòu jīn
dái > dai4
5.nǐ weì shén me dài zhe yǔ yī
dai4 > chuan1
(In Chinese, we use CHUAN1 for clothes, while DAI4 for accessories.)
我穿着运动衫，戴着帽子、围着围巾。
jin tian(first tune),tian(first tune)qi,you(third tune),dai(fourthe tune)zhe,tou(second tune)jin,
very good,Sabine!!!!!!!go ahead!!!:)
Arrrrgh -- these tones are difficult to remember and i don't always notice when I do them wrong.
Thank you so much for your help, I have learned a lot today!!
Very good!
Not bad.
Please see the Warren Wong's comment.
that's right
您学的真是非常好.!
不过有一点小问题,jīn tiàn 应该是tiān
还有yīn weì 应该是到wéi .
zuò tiàn 应该是zuó tiān
就这么一点点问题
但是总的来说还是非常非常好的.!~~
Dear Sabine,
In this text we can know that we have to write about 5 days differert weather.For example ,we can write just like this:jin tian shi xing qi yi ,tian qi hen hao ,xing qi er de tian qi bu shi hen hao ,yin wei xia yu le,xing qi san tai yang de yang guang hen hao .xing qi si ,tai yang zhao chang sheng qi .xing qi wu wo jue ding he jia ren yi qi chu qu wan,tian qi zhen de shi tai hao le.今天是星期一，天气很好，星期二的天气不是很好，因为下雨了，星期三太阳的阳光很好，星期四太阳照常升起。星期五我决定和家人一起出去玩。天气真的是太好了。
HAPPY CHRISMAS~Take care and happy holidays to you and your family,
ZHANG CHEN
Dear Sabine,
In this text we can know that we have to write about 5 days differert weather.For example ,we can write just like this:jin tian shi xing qi yi ,tian qi hen hao ,xing qi er de tian qi bu shi hen hao ,yin wei xia yu le,xing qi san tai yang de yang guang hen hao .xing qi si ,tai yang zhao chang sheng qi .xing qi wu wo jue ding he jia ren yi qi chu qu wan,tian qi zhen de shi tai hao le.今天是星期一，天气很好，星期二的天气不是很好，因为下雨了，星期三太阳的阳光很好，星期四太阳照常升起。星期五我决定和家人一起出去玩。天气真的是太好了。
HAPPY CHRISMAS~Take care and happy holidays to you and your family,
ZHANG CHEN
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ich mnchte germany
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我 穿 着 运 动 衫 ，戴 着 帽 子 ,围 着 围 巾。
我 (穿) 着 运 动 衫 ，（戴上）帽 子 和 头 巾。
很好。
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因为今 天 的 气 温比较低。所以我 就穿着 运 动 衫 ，戴了帽 子 和 头 巾。