Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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这个女人不胖。她很瘦。这个男孩很穷。他也不高。你年纪不大。你年纪小。这个女孩不负有。她很美很高。我是德国人。我不穷不负有。
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这个女人不胖。她很瘦。这个男孩很穷。他也不高。你年纪不大。你年纪小。这个女孩不富有。她很美很高。我是德国人。我不穷也不富有。
sehr gut!
负有should be"富有“
富有 but not 负有。 富means rich or full of
年轻 are more often used than 年纪小.
and yes负有,should be 富有.
:)
富有
注意标点符号的使用哦，不是一个完整的句子不能用句号
Well Done! just a few correction with red highlight.
这个女人不胖，她很瘦。这个男孩很穷，他也不高。你年纪不大，你年纪还小。这个女孩不负富有，但是她很美很高。我是德国人，我不穷也不负富有。
the correct这个男孩很穷，他不富有
这个女孩不富有 她很穷
at last , the sentence "我不穷不富有" seems that you are very clever . try more , you will skillde .