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Mandarin Chinese Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1

Transportation

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

nán hái men zhèng zài chuán shàng wán 。 nǔ hái men zhèng zài yòng cǎi sè là bǐ 、 qiān bǐ zài zhǐ shàng xiě zì 。 nán rén zhèng zài zuò dì tiě qù nà zhuáng lóu 。 nǐ zhèng zài zuò gōnggòng qìchē qù cān tīng 。

男孩们正在船上玩。女孩们正在用彩色蜡笔、铅笔在纸上写字。男人正在坐地铁去那幢楼。你正在坐bus去餐厅。

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  • Andy
    Mochapoints: 30  |  Teacher Score: 19 (0%)
    旅行时我一般也不带很多东西,主要是为了方便。我觉得带照相机是必需的,那可以将自己在路上所看到的东西拍下来,也算是一种留念吧。
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  • Andy
    Mochapoints: 30  |  Teacher Score: 19 (0%)
    度假一般都是到风景优美的地方,只要带上简单的行李就够了。所以你给出的答案算是比较完整的。如果天气热的话,可以带上一些防晒油,当然一般是年轻女性才会这样做的。
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  • norman
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  • norman
    Mochapoints: 1075  |  Teacher Score: 372 (0%)
    非常棒!发音也较正宗。 我非常赞同你的旅行观念。
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  • long
    Mochapoints: 737  |  Teacher Score: 408 (0%)
    非常好。中间用“一个小包”,最后用"就够了"稍好一点。
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  • 古国庆
    Mochapoints: 113  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
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  • talia
    Mochapoints: 1701  |  Teacher Score: 453 (0%)
    very good!
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  • 古国庆
    Mochapoints: 113  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
    假期是一个词组,渡假期又是一个词组,虽然意思相进,但不是同一个词语,"您"字是用在对尊敬的人才用,一般的人用"你"就可以了,因此可以直接是:你假期带一些什么东西?
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  • x13851969003
    Mochapoints: 48  |  Teacher Score: 20 (0%)
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  • x13851969003
    Mochapoints: 48  |  Teacher Score: 20 (0%)
    good
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  • 阿八
    Mochapoints: 1801  |  Teacher Score: 564 (0%)
    good,haha
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  • 阿八
    Mochapoints: 1801  |  Teacher Score: 564 (0%)
    我去旅行的时候,一般不带很多东西。因为东西重,不太方便。那时候(指旅行的时候)我会带上我的背包,包里放我需要的东西,像衣服,卫生用品,还有照相机啊(您这里的语气词很地道哦),另外我还会带上一本书。
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  • smile-lucky
    Mochapoints: 942  |  Teacher Score: 234 (0%)
    很好!意思表达得很明白,发音也不错。现根据您的原文多少改动一下,听起来或许会更流畅一些。供您参考: 假期旅行的时候,我带的东西不多,因为我喜欢轻便。我带的行李一般就是个小背包,里面装一些我需要的衣服啊,卫生用品啊,再加一本书、一个照相机,就够了。 附原文: 我去旅行的时候,我带的东西不多,因为我不喜欢带个很重的行李,我带的行李只是一种很小的背包,里面我装我需要的衣服,一些卫生用品啊,一本书,一个照相机,都够了。
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  • smile-lucky
    Mochapoints: 942  |  Teacher Score: 234 (0%)
    假期旅行的时候,我带的东西不多,因为我喜欢轻便。我带的行李一般就是个小背包,里面装一些我需要的衣服啊,卫生用品啊,再加一本书、一个照相机,就够了。
    Submitted over a year ago

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