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Mandarin Chinese Speaking Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Please recite the following paragraph. Press the 'add audio submission' button to record and submit this exercise.

nèi gè nián lǎo de nán rén tū dǐng 。 nián qīng nán rén méi yǒu tū dǐng 。 tā yòu yī tóu juǎn qū de hēi fà 。 wǒ yǒu yī tóu zōng sè de cháng fà。 nèi gè nán hái tóu fà bū shì hóng sè 。 tā yǒu yī tóu jīn fà 。 nèi gè nán rén yǒu hóng sè hú zi hé bā zì xū 。 nǔ rén méi yǒu hú zi 。 tā yǒu yī tóu hēi sè duǎn fà 。

那个年老的男人秃顶。年轻男人没有秃顶。她有一头卷曲的黑发。我有一头棕色的长发。那个男孩的头发不是红色的。他有一头金发。那个男人有红色的胡子和八字须。女人没有胡子。她有一头黑色的短发。

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  • **Ajou**
    Mochapoints: 198111  |  Teacher Score: 169887 (74%)

    男人  没有  卷发  棕色长发  金发  八字胡  短发

    Your Chinese is only little mistakes. Excluding it, your Chinese is almost perfect.

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  • suncake
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    really good,but some words can be better

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    really good,but some words can be better

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    really good,but some words can be better

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  • Lemon
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    Well  done ! 

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  • Rambo
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    good

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  • Huday
    Mochapoints: 12086  |  Teacher Score: 2963 (93%)

    I am very thankful to all of you that have commented and added the voice corrections. really thanks a lot!

    Ajou, Suncake, Lemon and Rambo.. Xie xie ni men... I will jia you!!

    Next week will have the Chinese Class Examination... I'm looking to practice on oral speaking... Thanks again.. I wish you all the best in your learning too.. wo men jia you aa p(^_^)q..

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  • chenyan
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    just ok

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    very good

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  • Huday
    Mochapoints: 12086  |  Teacher Score: 2963 (93%)

    Thanks Haider for reviewing..

    To Tom Tang, really thanks eventhough I am not very sure if I get what did you said, but probably I may figure it out through helps from some of my friends..

    To Jackson Lyon, thank you very much for giving me the records for my oral test. I really appreciate you helps...

    I really hope you all have a happy lessons here.. All the best!!

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  • rxning
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    "卷" 发音不对, 应读juan

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  • Soo Grace
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    pls listen to my recording, carry n

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