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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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这支七蜡笔。四支蜡笔是蓝色的,两支蜡笔是白色的和一支蜡笔是红色的。这只美鸟是黄色,黑色和绿色的。这只鸟不是紫色的。我们的三条狗是棕色和一条狗是黑色的。
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  • TTTTTT
    Mochapoints: 2272  |  Teacher Score: 682 (100%)

    美鸟:中文表达应为 - 漂亮的鸟

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  • lay_z1212
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    有七支蜡笔。四支蜡笔是蓝色的,两支蜡笔是白色的还有一支蜡笔是红色的。这只丽的鸟是黄色,黑色和绿色组成的。这只鸟不是紫色的。我们的三条狗是棕色还有一条狗是黑色的。(or 我们有四条狗,三条棕色的,一条黑色的。)

    very good! 加油!

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  • Nancy
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    Great job!

    这里有七支蜡笔。四支蜡笔是蓝色的,两支蜡笔是白色的,另一支蜡笔是红色的。这只美丽的鸟的羽毛是由黄的,黑的,绿的颜色交织而成的。这只鸟不是紫色的。我们有四条狗,三条是棕色的,一条是黑色的。

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  • Becker Loong/Ma...
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    蜡笔。四支蜡笔是蓝色的,两支蜡笔是白色的还有一支蜡笔是红色的。这只美丽的鸟羽毛黄色黑色和绿色组成。这只鸟不是紫色的。我们三条狗是棕色还有一条狗是黑色的。

    不错!再接再厉!!

    Becker.

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  • mochen
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    这七支蜡笔。四支蜡笔是蓝色的,两支蜡笔是白色的和一支蜡笔是红色的。这只漂亮的鸟是黄色的,黑色的和绿色的。这只鸟不是紫色的。我们的三条狗是棕色还有一条狗是黑色的。

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  • Geo
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    這有七個蠟筆。四個蠟筆是藍色的,二個蠟筆是白色的和一個蠟筆是紅色的。這隻漂亮的鳥,有黃色、黑色和綠色。但(這隻鳥)沒有紫色的。我們有三條棕色的狗和一條黑色的狗。

    这有七个蜡笔。四个蜡笔是蓝色的,二个蜡笔是白色的和一个蜡笔是红色的。这只漂亮的鸟,有黄色、黑色和绿色。但(这只鸟)没有紫色的。我们有三条棕色的狗和一条黑色的狗。

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  • Carolyn
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  • LeogavinJia
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    Sentence 01. there are... => 这/那里有。。Sentence 02. and (in the sense that connects simple sentences) => 而且Sentence 03. beautiful bird => 美丽的鸟 [all adjectives end with "的"]Sentence 04. perfectSentence 05. see sentence 02

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  • Carolyn
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    这七支蜡笔。

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