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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

阿芯 - Asin's submission: Average Rating:
那个女人匆忙的走进花店里,她正要去买花。那个男人把车停在花店门前,坐在车里正在等她买花。对面跑来了一位警察先生,他正要去警告坐在车里的男人,因为在繁忙的马路上是不被允许把车停在路旁的。
那位老爷爷坐在咖啡门前的椅子上休息。倍在一旁的小女孩无聊的东张西望。
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  • Seres
    Mochapoints: 1516  |  Teacher Score: 97 (0%)

    "陪"在一旁的小女孩无聊的东张西望。

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  • 番茄
    Mochapoints: 393  |  Teacher Score: 55 (0%)

    “倍”改成“陪”  

    已经很好了,很完整,短文前后很连贯。

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  • Talia
    Mochapoints: 12291  |  Teacher Score: 3176

    Excellent. keep it up 阿芯!

    在一旁的小女孩无聊的东张西望。

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  • Mochapoints: 1031  |  Teacher Score: 83 (0%)

    位老爷爷坐在咖啡门前的椅子上休息在一旁的小女孩无聊东张西望。

    这样更好

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  • Mery
    Mochapoints: 6965  |  Teacher Score: 764 (0%)

    很好

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  • Lily Lin
    Mochapoints: 1635  |  Teacher Score: 13 (0%)

    你寫得很好,每個人的動作都不一樣。有個字是錯的 --倍(陪)在一旁的小女孩。

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  • 张丽
    Mochapoints: 528  |  Teacher Score: 76 (0%)

    那个女人匆忙的走进花店里,正要去买花。那个男人把车停在花店门前,坐在车里正在等她买花。对面跑来了一位警察先生,他正要去警告坐在车里的男人,因为在繁忙的马路上是不允许把车停在路旁的。那位老爷爷坐在咖啡门前的椅子上休息。在一旁的小女孩无聊的东张西望。

     

    good   ,very   well。

    很棒哦!

    加油!努力#@!~(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……

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  • Fine
    Mochapoints: 150  |  Teacher Score: 32 (0%)

    真的已经很不错了

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  • Fine
    Mochapoints: 150  |  Teacher Score: 32 (0%)

    因为在繁忙的马路上是不被允许把车停在路旁的

    因为不允许把车停在繁忙的马路旁

    Submitted over a year ago

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