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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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我有一个很好的中国朋友。她的老家在山东省。她的诚实，诚恳，还有独立都深深地打动了我。她肯定很漂亮，很可爱。
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  • lichong
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  • lichong
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    非常的好!
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  • 翔
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    很不错.This word "她的诚实' is should be '她诚实,诚恳'
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  • sun521655
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    不错`就是太罗嗦，写的话不要太多的标点符号显的不怎么好看！！！（个人意见仅供参考）
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  • nancyzhl
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    The sentense“她肯定很漂亮，很可爱。” is not so good.If you wang to express "She is really cute",you'd better use“她确实很漂亮，很可爱。”
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    Very good writing.
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  • 曾现侠
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  • 曾现侠
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    我也有一个很好的美国朋友。他住在华盛顿附近。他热情，诚恳，好学，严谨。He is the best that I have met from western! And he also will be the only best for me in the future.
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  • 玥玓瓅
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  • 玥玓瓅
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    这样表达更好“我有一个好朋友来自中国，她的老家在山东省，她的诚实．诚恳．还有独立都深深的打动了我．她确实是个既漂亮又可爱的女孩．＂ Ｙｏｕ　ｄｉｄ　ａ　ｇｏｏｄ　ｊｏｂ　！ｋｅｅｐ　ｉｔ　ｕｐ！^_^
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  • Andy_xiaodu
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    Your sentecnes are very beautiful and there are not any grammar mistake expect some punctuation mark. The correction is below just for you reference. 我有一个很好的朋友，她的老家在山东省。她的诚实、诚恳、还有独立都深深地打动了我。她肯定很漂亮，很可爱。
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  • Trakinas
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    Well done! I think your phrase is very correct and flunt!
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  • Mr.Nee
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    很好！very good!
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    她很漂亮，很可爱。
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    山东省 是她的家乡.
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