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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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Jin tian he mingtian wo he wo de qizi yao qu kan hou baozhu. Mingtian shi qiyue si hao, shi yi ge hen zhongyao de tian zai Meiguo. Jin tian women qu mai baozhu. Ming tian women you yi ge yecan zai yi ge gong yuan. Shi dian zhong mei ge ren dou kan hou baozhu.
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  • Crystal
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    Good! hou baozhu???不明白什么意思.. 今天和明天我和妻子要去看hou baozhu.明天是7月4号,在美国是一个很重要的日子,所以我们今天要买baozhu.明天我们要在一个公园看hou baozhu.四天中,每个人都要看hou baozhu. "hou baozhu"or "放炮竹＂＂放烟花＂
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    Shi dian zhong shoud change to Si tian zhong I'm sorry that I really can't understand qu kan hou baozhu. Be well
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  • 玥玓瓅
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    今天和明天我和我的妻子去看爆竹。明天是七月四号，是一个很重要的一天在美国=在美国是个很重要的日子。今天我们去买爆竹。明天我们有一个免费看爆竹的活动在一个公园，是纪念美国人独立的日子我们都看爆竹。 Independence Day=独立日 yecan =义看=免费看 dian =奠=纪念 huo baozhu=火爆竹=爆竹 Try to describe in Chinese Characters next time!
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    Excellect ! I can understand you easily. Let me have a try. My wife and I want to see a display of fireworks today and tomorrow. Tomorrow is July 4th. It is a very important day in America. Today we'll go to buy some firecrackers. We'll have a picnic in a park tomorrow. Everybody can watch the fireworks at 10 pm. jin tian he ming tian wo he wo de qizi yao 今　天　和　明　　天　我　和　我的　妻子　要　 qu kan fang yan huo (huo baozhu). mingtian 去　看　　放　烟　火　（火　爆　竹）。　明天 shi qi yue si hao. shi yi ge hen zhong yao 是　七　月四　号，是　一个　很　　重　　要 de　rizi ( tian)zai mei guo. jin tian women 的　日子（天）　在　美国。 今 天 我们 qu mai baozhu. ming tian you yi ge yecan 去 买 爆竹 明　　天　　有　一个　野餐 zai yi ge gong yuan .　shi dian zhong 在　一个　　公园　。 十　点　钟 mei ge ren dou kan fang bao zhu. 每　个　人　都　　看　放　爆　　竹。 ( huo bao zhu). 今天和明天我和我的妻子要去看放烟火／焰火。明天是七月四号，在美国它是一个很重要的日子。今天我们去买爆竹，明天在公园里我们有一个野餐，晚上十点钟大家一起看烟火／焰火表演。
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  • may
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    fantastic!
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    写的很好！ 建议你用汉字表达，因为拼音只对读汉字有帮助，而且容易产生歧义。
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    If you chang the tian with rizi or jieri ,that would be better,and women should be divided like wo men, but your chinese is excellent, well done!
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  • Doug <大哥>
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    Thanks for all your corrections. Xie Xie ni men.
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  • samasha
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    很棒，中文学的很好！但是中文是要有声调的，所以这样是容易让人产生歧义！ 今天和明天我要和我的妻子去看火爆竹，明天是7月4号，是一个很重要的日子在美国！今天我们去卖爆竹，明天我们在公园有一个野餐。晚上10点钟每个人都在看放爆竹！
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  • summer
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    Well done! 1. hou baozhu - "yan huo" means "fireworks", "bao zhu" means "firecracker". Choose one of them. As I know, American don't use firecrackers a lot. So I change your sentence into "Jin tian he mingtian wo he wo de qizi yao qu kan yan hou. " 2. shi yi ge hen zhongyao de tian zai Meiguo. - Put "zai mei guo" in front of your sentence, which is different with English. It is better you say "ri zi", not "tian". My correction: "zai mei guo shi yi ge hen zhong yao de ri zi." 3. tian women you yi ge yecan zai yi ge gong yuan. - The same problem. It is better if you put "zai yi ge gong yuan" before the sentence. My correction: "ming tian zai yi ge gong yuan wo men you yi ge ye can."
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    Normally, follow this order: when + where + who + what happened.
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  • becky lee
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    Mingtian shi qiyue si hao, shi yi ge hen zhongyao de tian rizi zai Meiguo.Jin tian women qu mai baozhu  paozhu(yanhua). Ming tian women you yi ge yecan zai yi ge gong yuan. Shi dian zhong mei ge ren dou qu kan hou baozhu  fangyanhua fangpaozhu  

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    懂汉字吗?
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