Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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Zhe ge nv ren shi shou. Ta bu shi pang. Zhe ge nan ren shi hen qiong. Ta bu shi fu you. Zhe ge nan hai shi ai. Ta bu shi gao. Zhe ge nv hai shi nan ji xiao. Ta bu shi nan ji da. Ni shi nv ren. Ni bu shi nan ren. Wo shi nan ren. Wo bu shi nv ren.
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mavinMochapoints: 2791 | Teacher Score: 646 (0%)Zhe ge nv ren shou. Ta bu pang. Zhe ge nan ren hen qiong. Ta bu fu you. Zhe ge nan hai ai. Ta bu gao. Zhe ge nv hai nian ji xiao. Ta nian ji bu da. Ni shi nv ren. Ni bu shi nan ren. Wo shi nan ren. Wo bu shi nv ren. 很好，只是有一点点小错误，比上次提交的要好很多，继续加油---努力！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
sheilaMochapoints: 988 | Teacher Score: 88 (0%)You write is good. But in mandarin, we don't say "is" before abjectival word, for example, "zhe ge nv ren shou." "ta bu pang." The other one thing is age, it is "nian ji". At last, it is a little problem. The sentence is" ta bu shi nan ji da." in mandarin, we will say "ta nian ji bu da." that is all. Good job! Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
vivian Mochapoints: 801 | Teacher Score: 72 (0%)hi, You should foget shi in some stentence. Zhe ge nv ren shou. Ta bu pang. Zhe ge nan ren hen qiong. Ta bu fu you. Zhe ge nan hai ai. Ta bu gao. Zhe ge nv hai nian ji xiao. Ta nian ji bu da. Ni shi nv ren. Ni bu shi nan ren. Wo shi nan ren. Wo bu shi nv ren. 加油！继续努力 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
yunMochapoints: 261 | Teacher Score: 20 (0%)You work is good, but there is one thing that you need to pay attention to.It is that in chinese wo don't use 'shi' as a verb when using he or she as a subject. So when you do such exercises just use he or she as subject, you could don't translate 'is' into chinese, it can omite 'shi' all right. Try more, I believe you can do well. Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
yunMochapoints: 261 | Teacher Score: 20 (0%)Submitted over a year ago
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SallyMochapoints: 200 | Teacher Score: 5 (0%)Zhe ge nv ren shi shou. Ta bu shi pang .Zhe ge nan ren shi hen qiong. Ta bu shi fu you. Zhe ge nan hai shi ai. Ta bu shi gao. (zhe ge nv ren hen shou,ta bu pang. chinese ppl speak that will be without shi) Ni shi nv ren. Ni bu shi nan ren. Wo shi nan ren. Wo bu shi nv ren.(right) Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
JanetMochapoints: 17 | Teacher Score: 15 (0%)zhe ge nv ren shi shou de ,ta bu pang 。zhe ge nan ren hen qiong ,ta bu fu you 。zhe ge nan hai ai ,ta bu gao 。zhe ge nv hai nian ji xiao,ta nian ji bu da 。ni shi nv ren ,bu shi nan ren ,wo shi nan ren ,bu shi nv ren。 you did a good job . Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate -
jellycatMochapoints: 12529 | Teacher Score: 7370 (96%)ok just one mistake nian ji not nan ji Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
MartineMochapoints: 1150 | Teacher Score: 243 (0%)
Very nice! Go ahead! Notice the word 'shi', don't put it before the adjective when the subject before the word 'shi', another status we can put. ta shi a ge mei li de nv ren. Submitted over a year agoSpelling: Proficiency: Grammar: Translate
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