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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

kim nimol's submission: Average Rating:
I went to the beach yesterday. I've seen many people there enjoy swimming and playing ball on sand. the first impression for me is the woman wearing red shirt,she was too short sitting close to the tall guy with white skin boy and one black skin girl.they seem to be enjoy for their visiting.
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    Corrections: I saw many people there enjoying swimming and playing ball on the sand. A first impression for me was a woman wearing a red shirt. She was too short. She sat close to a tall White guy and a Black girl. (or were there 3 people: a tall guy, a White guy and a Black girl?) They seemed to enjoy their visit.
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