Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise

Describing People

Describe six different people, using two descriptive words each: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young. The boy is tall.

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Victoria
这个女人高。她瘦。

这个男人胖。他矮。

这个男孩富有。

这个女孩很穷。

你年纪小。你是男人。

我年纪大。我是女人。
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Submitted: 2008-12-09 15:49:31




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  • 2008-08-10 23:07:06
    wjlucy
    你写的很好, 加油!
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  • 2008-08-10 23:13:25
    louinawo(卢艺萌 Lu...
    you did good job! but 这个男孩富有only has one teatur, you should write two to describe a same person. Such as"这个男孩又年轻又富有. or we say"这个男孩很年轻,这个南海很富有." so is the next sentence. keep practicing!
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  • 2008-08-10 23:43:38
    波斯菊
    你说的好棒,不过我想把“你年纪小,你是男人。”改成你“年纪小,你是男孩”会好些,是吧。
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  • 2008-08-11 01:49:24
    genie
    这个女人又高又瘦。 这个男人又胖又矮。 这个男孩富有。 这个女孩很穷。 你年纪小。你是男人。 我年纪大。我是女人。
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  • 2008-08-11 01:51:15
    萤火虫 Firefly
    注意你的标点符号!不过你真的很棒了!继续加油!
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  • 2008-08-27 17:16:00
    diego
    diego willian
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  • 2008-11-25 10:18:09
    xiaobo
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    很棒! 不过这样会好些,如:"这个女人高但是她瘦。"
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  • 2008-12-09 15:49:30
    Papago

    Your good work, you are very hard.你的作业很好,你很用功。\\\\这个女人她又高又瘦。那个男人他又胖又矮。这个男孩很富。那个女孩很穷。\\\\\\你是年纪小的男人 to 你是男孩。(you are boy.) ;\\\\\\我是年纪大的女人。to 我是大姐。(i am older sister.) 

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