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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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Wo jiao Mick, wo yao san ge dai chuang hu. Wo mei you shi jian zhao. Wo yao qu Beijing, wo xiang liu huo che piao.
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  • Melissa
    Mochapoints: 132  |  Teacher Score: 26 (0%)
    “‘dai’ chuang hu” Do you mean "da" "Wo mei you shi jian zhao" I am afarid I can't catch this sentence. Fighting!
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  • Linda Shu
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    我叫MIKE.我要三哥带传话.我没有时间找,我要去北京.我想留火车票. 我叫MIKE,我要三哥(帮我)带传话.我没有时间去找(他,她)我要去北京.我想(要他帮我)留(买)火车票. very good! 您的拼音学得非常好,要继续努力.加油呀!
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  • 张洁玲
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    加油,你的中文拼写不是很好哦。不过你会很棒的
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  • Xiaolan Tao
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    挺有意思的,非常好,要注意里面的错误。
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  • thj1987
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    good,but there are some mistakes,you should pay attention to it ,wo yao san ge dai chuang hu ,i dont know its means,
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  • Yux Xiang
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    ...要三个"dai chuang hu"? (我没有看懂)
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  • joy
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    "wo yao san ge dai chuang hu" zhe ju mei kan dong .wo yao san ge shen me ?
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  • czp
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    Very good. Besides, if it means You want find a house with whree windows, You should say Be happy in China!!
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  • Joe
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  • sudongsailing
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    your name is mick."wo yao san ge dai chuang hu "what do you want ?you haven't enouth time to find.you want to Beijing.do you want save ticket?
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  • MCXZJG
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  • zhang08624
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    hen hao
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  • Linda Shu
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    very good!
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  • 海豚梦
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    继续努力啊!一定会成功的
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  • 哓波
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    语法有些不通.
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  • Linda Shu
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    很好,如果能写上中文字就更好了!
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  • Apple
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    dai chuang hu? I don't understand these words.
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  • 哓波
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    语句不太通顺.语法有点错误.希望继续加油!
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  • liuadj
    Mochapoints: 737  |  Teacher Score: 152 (0%)
    三个大窗户?,什么意思?, 我想留火车票?,什么意思?,
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  • smiling
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    Sorry ,I can't get you very well. I think you want to buy the ticket to Beijing .You can say like that:wo xiang mai liu hao de che piao I really don't know what's the meaning for "wo yao san ge dai chuang hu"
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  • smiling
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    Sorry ,I can't get you very well. I think you want to buy the ticket to Beijing .You can say like that:wo xiang mai liu hao de che piao I really don't know what's the meaning for "wo yao san ge dai chuang hu"
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  • smiling
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    Sorry ,I can't get you very well. I think you want to buy the ticket to Beijing .You can say like that:wo xiang mai liu hao de che piao I really don't know what's the meaning for "wo yao san ge dai chuang hu"
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  • smiling
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    Sorry ,I can't get you very well. I think you want to buy the ticket to Beijing .You can say like that:wo xiang mai liu hao de che piao I really don't know what's the meaning for "wo yao san ge dai chuang hu"
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  • lork
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    your have done great job.but idon't know what do you mean by dai chuang hu. heh
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  • kerri
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    不明白!
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  • zyfeng_01
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    我看的不是很明白。
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  • 李露
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    “我叫Mick,我要三个???。我没有时间找。我要去北京,我想?火车票。” 我非常抱歉我翻译不了其中四个字,我认为你的拼音很好。你应该把中文的字打出来,并且读出来说出来。 我想这些方法能提高你的中文水平。(I'm sorry I cann't translate four words in your passage.I think your pinyin is very good。But you should write down the words,and you should also read and speak the words,I think they may improve your Chinese.)
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  • oyeah
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    maybe you wanna say you want an apartment of three windows, but you did not mention the word "apartment". also maybe you would like to buy train ticket, so you would say " mai huo che piao", not "liu huo che piao". " liu" means keep.
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  • davi_dc
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    dai chuang hu. ???不明白
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  • ailysa
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    你好厉害哦!加油!
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  • hgm
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    很好!但是意思表达得不是很清楚,不太容易理解。
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  • hgm
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    很好!但是意思表达得不是很清楚,不太容易理解。
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  • jasmine
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    逻辑不太清楚,所以整句的意思很难理解,特别是最后一句
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  • 平智
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    Very good Pin Yin. But can't understand some words. 2nd sentence: you want 3 "dai" windows. 3rd :you don't have time to do "zhao" 5th: you want to "liu" train ticket
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  • Ruth
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    Welcome to China. 我叫Mick,我要三个......我没有......我要去北京,我想....火车票."dai chuang hu/shi jian zhao. /liu"not understand. Continue!
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  • 夕阳美/April
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    Hi, Mick, I am very interested in what you wrote. What's the meaning? I'd like to have a try. Please tell me if I am right. I am Mick. I want three ( gai chuang hu?). I have no time to find. I want to go to Beijing. I want to (liu) train ticket. wo jiao Mick, wo yao san ge da (dai) chuang 我 叫 米克,我 要  三 个大(袋) 窗 hu. wo mei you shi jian zhao. wo yao qu 户.我 没 有  时间  找. 我 要 去 beijing.wo xiang liu huo che piao. 北京. 我 想  留 火 车 票. ??? I really want to know what your meaning is.
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  • xiazhen0978
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    "wo yao san ge dai chuang hu"what's meaning in English? Wo mei you shi jian mai. Wo xiang mai huo che piao.
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  • lisa6315
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    there are some sentences I don't understund. you can chaneg them as follows: Wo jiao Mick, Wo yao qu Beijing, wo xiang ding (liu)san zhang kao chuang hu de huo che piao. (delete the following sentences: wo yao san ge dai chuang hu.) Wo mei you shi jian (zhao.) zhao?
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  • Monica
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  • chen
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    good . 这是什么意思"wo yao san ge dai chuag hu" ----mai huo che piao
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  • 张新光
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    为什么都是拼音,没有汉字?
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  • pfphoenix
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    I can not understand you very well, sorry.
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  • 珍珍潘
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    我叫麦克,我要三个带窗户。我没有时间找,我要去北京,我想留火车票 you said want to have the house which is have three windows, and you want to go to bejing , and you will buy train tickets.Oh I don't think you can by train go to bejing.hehehe well done!! keep it up!!
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  • 珍珍潘
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    我叫麦克,我要三个带窗户。我没有时间找,我要去北京,我想留火车票 you said want to have the house which is have three windows, and you want to go to bejing , and you will buy train tickets.Oh I don't think you can by train go to bejing.hehehe well done!! keep it up!!
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  • Christina
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    da chuang hu
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  • jerry_wong
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    i don't konw you mean

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  • Derek Shi
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    Next time, put the English following the Chinese, then I will be clear what you mean.

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  • Sue
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    It's better to say like this : 我叫Mick, 我要去北京,要买三张靠窗户的火车票,可是我没有时间去。wo jiao Mick, wo yao qu Beijing, yao mai san zhang kao chuang hu de huo che piao, ke shi wo mei you shi jian qu .

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