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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Description of the four career: a woman, a man, you and me. Sure to use words and sentences in the negative. For example: I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

Wo shi jiat shi; wo shi bu yi sheng. Ta shi nan hai xue sheng. Ta nv ren shi hu shu.
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  • davi_dc
    Mochapoints: 1026  |  Teacher Score: 96 (0%)
    wo shi bu yi sheng ?? no wo bu shi yi sheng. yes
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  • cfhdgl
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    不知如何回答你,前部份是看懂了,我觉得没有什么问题,但后一部分,我无法理解,希望你继续努力
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  • cdlg3000
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  • cnsdhero
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    wo shi xue sheng. na ge nan ren shi yi sheng; ta bu shi jiao shi. bu cuo .ji xu nu li!
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  • 夕阳美/April
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    The man is a doctor, he is not a teacher. na ge nan ren shi yi sheng, ta bu shi jiao shi. 那 个 男 人 是 医 生, 他 不是 教 师. wo shi jiao (jiat) shi, wo bu shi ( shi bu ) 我 是 教    师,我 不 是 yi sheng. 医 生. ta shi nan (hai) xue sheng. 他 是 男    学 生. ta shi nv ren, ta shi hu shi (shu). 她 是 女人, 她是 护士. Very good! Keep it up!
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  • Susan
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    我是教師.wo shi jiao shi . 我是医生,wo shi yi sheng , 他是男孩学生.ta shi nan hai xuesheng
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  • wishes
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    Wo shi jiao shi; wo bu shi yi sheng. Ta shi nan xue sheng. Ta shi nv ren ye shi hu shi. I don't know what's the last sentence mean?she is a nurse?
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  • gu jian fei
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    where are you from?
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  • JIM-ZOU
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    good
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  • edison
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    Wo shi jiao shi . wo bu shi yi sheng. ta shi nan xue sheng . ta nv ren shi hu shi .
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    wo shi jiao shi;wo bu shi.........na ge nan de shi yi sheng. na ge nv sheng shi hu shi.jia you.加油!!
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  • DJ
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    Wo shi jiat shi; wo shi bu yi sheng. Ta shi nan hai xue sheng. Ta nv ren shi hu shu. I give you some corretions to you. 我是个教师(jiaoshi),我不是医生,他是个男学生。她是个护士。
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  • wangfamous
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    wo shi jiao shi; wo bu shi yi sheng; zhe ge nan hai shi xue sheng; zhe ge nv ren shi hu shi.
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  • lork
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    wo shi jiao shi;wo BU shi yi sheng. ta shi nan hai.ta shi xue sheng. ZHE(the/this) nv ren shi hu shi.
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  • xiazhen0978
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    I think that you can description of the four career in Chinese.For example: I'm a teacher.I am not a student.
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  • xiazhen0978
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    Wo shi jiao shi; wo bu shi yi sheng.Ta shi nan xue sheng;ta bu shi hu shi.
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  • Sally
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    you just translated " 用否定句",the sentence is not complete. And something is wrong about your Chinese Pinyin. "wo shi jiao shi;wo shi ge yi sheng;ta shi ge nan xue sheng; na nv ren shi hu shi."
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  • chenxiyan
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    jiat in english? shi bu should be bu shi which mean is not. in nan hai xue sheng should delete hai, only nan will do. ta nv ren shi bu shu , what' s the meaning in english?
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  • Michael
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    wo shi jiaoshi. wo bushi yisheng. ta shi nan xuesheng.nage nvren shi hushi. I am a teacher.I am not a doctor. He is a student.The woman is a nurse. I think it's what you wanna descible.
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  • Catherine
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    Hi Mick, English英语 pinyin拼音 (Chinese character汉字) woman : nv ren (女人) man : nan ren (男人) doctor : yi sheng (医生) student : xue sheng (学生) teacher : jiao shi (教师) is : shi (是) isn't : bu shi (不是) 一个女人、一个男人、你和我。 yi ge nv ren 、yi ge nan ren 、ni he wo 我是学生。 wo shi xue sheng . 那个男人是医生; na ge nan ren shi yi sheng ; 他不是教师。 ta bu shi jiao shi . " ta " means he or she ta : 他 (he) or 她 (she)
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  • Alina
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    (“描述四个人的职业: 一个女人、一个男人、你和我。 用肯定句和否定句。例如:我是学生。 那个男人是医生;他不是教师。” is mean: Description of the four career: a woman, a man, you and me. Sure to use words and sentences in the negative. For example: I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher. )----You are right! "Wo shi jiat shi; " maybe : "wo shi jiao shi." "wo shi bu yi sheng." is right. "Ta shi nan hai xue sheng. "-----maybe you want to say :"He is a student." right? rihgt sentence is:" Ta shi xue sheng." ( Because in chinese , 她=she,他=he) "Ta nv ren shi hu shu. "-----Idon't understand.
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  • pfphoenix
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    Wo shi jiat shi --- wo shi jiao shi wo shi bu yi sheng --- wo bu shi yi sheng Ta shi nan hai xue sheng --- ta shi nan xue sheng Ta nv ren shi hu shu --- ta shi nv hu shi
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  • lucy zhao
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    Wo shi jiat(jiao) shi; wo shi bu yi sheng(wo bu shi yi sheng). Ta shi nan hai xue sheng(I don't know the man's occupation,student?). Ta nv ren(Ta qi zi) shi hu shu.
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  • 珍珍潘
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    sorry if you want to told me that you are learing english and chinese , yes?
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  • 夏沫
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    wǒ shì jiào shī, wǒ bú shì yī shēng。tā shì nán 我 是 教 师,我 不 是 医 生。 他 是 男xué shēng。tā shì nǚ rén,tā shì hù shì。 学 生 。她 是 女 人, 她 是 护 士
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  • micheal
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    Wo shi (jiat) shi --> jiao shi wo (shi bu) yi sheng--> bu shi Ta shi (nan hai xue sheng)-->nan xue sheng Ta( )nv ren shi (hu shu)--->shi, hu shi well done ! grandpa Mick.
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  • Christina
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    wo shi jiao shi,wo bu shi yi sheng,ta 他shi xue sheng.ta 她shi hu shi
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  • maggie
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    我不是医生。wo bu shi yi sheng .

    他是男学生。ta shi nan xue sheng .

    他不是女人。ta bu shi nv ren.

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  • yvonne139
    Mochapoints: 2069  |  Teacher Score: 861 (60%)

    wo shi jiao shi

    wo bu shi yi sheng (in English you say is not,but in Chinese we change the order, we say not is(bu shi), see that's the difference)

    ta shi nan xue sheng

    ta shi nv hu shi

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  • bagatvr
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    wo shi jiao shi. 我是教师.I am a teacher.

    wo bu shi yi sheng. 我不是医生。I am not a doctor.

    ta shi ge nan hai,shi xue sheng. 他是个男孩,是学生。He is a boy and he is a student.

    ta shi nv ren,shi hu shi. 她是女人,是护士。She is a woman and she is a nurse.

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  • Sue
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    Wo shi (yi ming) jiat(jiao) shi; wo (bu) shi bu yi sheng. Ta shi nan hai xue sheng. Ta  (Na) nv ren shi hu shu (shi). 我是一名教师,我不是医生。他是男生,那女人是护士。

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  • 雪山Snow
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    wangfamous  is right。

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  • lemon
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    Wo shi jiat(jiao shi) shi; wo shi bu(bu shi) yi sheng. Ta shi nan hai(bing qie shi) xue sheng. Ta(na ge) nv ren shi hu shu

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