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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

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这朵花不是黄色的。它是棕色的。那座房子是蓝色的。那辆汽车不是银色的。那辆汽车是黑色的。你的房子不是绿色的,它是粉红色的。我的大楼是白色的。
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  • cyberman
    Mochapoints: 5092  |  Teacher Score: 1568

    相当好. 加油!

    注意标点符号和代名词的使用.

    这朵花不是黄色的它是棕色的。

    那辆汽车不是银色的它是是黑色的。

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  • 小白菜
    Mochapoints: 280  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    很棒 注意:重复的词用多了,还有标点符号

    这朵花不是黄色的,它是棕色的.那辆汽车不是银色的,它是黑色的.你的房子不是绿色的,是粉红色的.

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  • 小白菜
    Mochapoints: 280  |  Teacher Score: 16 (0%)

    字可以去掉的

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  • zzhmls
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    excellent!

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  • sally
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    good!

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  • Sylvia 韦舒玮
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    我只是觉得很奇怪。外国人都是这样学中文的吗?

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  • Rita
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    good job!

    这朵花不是黄色的,它是棕色的。那座房子不是红色的,它是蓝色的。(这样才和你的整篇文章对称)那辆汽车不是银色的。它是黑色的。你的房子不是绿色的,它是粉红色的。我的大楼不是蓝色的,它是白色的。

    继续加油!

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  • Hannah
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    u did a very good job . u writting chinese is perfect, there is nothing wrong with ur sentences.  :)

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  • Hannah
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    u did a very good job . u writting chinese is perfect, there is nothing wrong with ur sentences.  :)

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  • Hannah
    Mochapoints: 385  |  Teacher Score: 50 (0%)

    u did a very good job . u writting chinese is perfect, there is nothing wrong with ur sentences.  :)

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  • Hannah
    Mochapoints: 385  |  Teacher Score: 50 (0%)

    u did a very good job . u writting chinese is perfect, there is nothing wrong with ur sentences.  :)

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  • Hannah
    Mochapoints: 385  |  Teacher Score: 50 (0%)

    u did a very good job . u writting chinese is perfect, there is nothing wrong with ur sentences.  :)

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  • Cai
    Mochapoints: 1594  |  Teacher Score: 220 (0%)

    这朵花不是黄色的。它是棕色的。那座房子是蓝色的。那辆汽车不是银色的。那辆汽车是黑色的。你的房子不是绿色的,它是粉红色的。我的大楼是白色的。 You  shoul write like that:这朵花不是黄色的,它是棕色的;那辆汽车不是银色的,它是黑色的;你的房子不是绿色的,它是粉红色的。In fact ,you  do very well .

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  • Sweety - 慧凌
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    excellent!!

    you are the best.

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  • Joyhaixia
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    I agree with the Cyberman's comment.

    It is a very good job. have a nice day for you

    Joy

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  • Joanna
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    Well done! Pls. keep going!

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  • Harjol
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    Well done! :)

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  • V {独孤求败}
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    这朵花不是黄色的 而 是棕色的

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