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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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zhe ge nu ren hen pang ye hen ai
Zhe ge nan ren shaui ye hen gao.
zhe ge nan hai nain ji shao ye hen shou.
zhe ge nu hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming.
ni bu dan ai er qie shao.
wo shi gao ye pang.
Zhe ge nan ren shaui ye hen gao.
zhe ge nan hai nain ji shao ye hen shou.
zhe ge nu hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming.
ni bu dan ai er qie shao.
wo shi gao ye pang.
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1。zhe ge nan ren 'shuai'
2。zhe ge nan hai 'nian' ji 'xiao'
3。ni bu dan ai er qie 'xiao'
4。wo hen gao ye （hen） pang
zhe ge nu ren hen pang ye hen ai ,zhe ge nan ren hen shuai ye hen gao .zhe ge nan hai nian ji xiao ye hen shou . zhe ge nu hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming ni bu dan ai er qie xiao , wo hen gao ye hen pang !
that all~you did a good job!
Good！keep it up!
ni de zuo ye wan cheng de hen hao. zhi you yi xie xiao xiao de cuo wu. "zhe ge nan ren shuai ye hen gao" "shuai" shi dui de, "shaui" shi cuo de."zhe ge nan hai nian ji xiao" "xiao" shi dui de ,"shao" shi cuo de."ni bu dan ai er qie shou" "shou"shi dui de. "shao" shi cuo de. jia you, ni hen hao .
zhe ge nv ren hen pang ye hen ai Zhe ge nan ren hen shuai ye hen gao. zhe ge nan hai nian ji xiao ye hen shou. zhe ge nv hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming. ni bu dan ai er qie xiao. wo bujin gao erqie pang.
nv ren not nu ren.
pls note your interpunction!
zhe ge nu ren hen pang ye hen ai ,Zhe ge nan ren shuai ye hen gao. zhe ge nan nain ji xiao ye hen shou. zhe ge nu ren hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming. ni bu dan ai er qie xiao wo hen gao ye pang.
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zhe ge nu ren hen pang ye hen ai ,Zhe ge nan ren shuai ye hen gao. zhe ge nan nain ji xiao ye hen shou. zhe ge nu ren hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming. ni bu dan ai er qie xiao wo hen gao ye pang.
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nv ren,nv hai ,zhe ge nan hai nian ji xiao
nv ren,nv hai ,zhe ge nan hai nian ji xiao
zhe ge nV ren hen pang ye hen ai; zhe ge nan ren SHUAI QI ye hen gao ( you mean that man is handsome? and tall I think); zhe ge nan hai NIAN ji XIAO ye hen shou; zhe ge nV hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming; ni bu dan ai er qie XIAO or SHOU; wo gao da qie pang.
Edward, you seem knowing some Chinese before;)
加油！！！
“shaui ”should be "shuai" ,"nain ji shao"--"nian ji xiao""nu " --"nv". Good job. Come on!
Good enough as a beginner! I guess you haven't learnt Chinese characters yet, right? Actually you don't have to if you just wanna use Chinese on conversational occassions.
nu should be "nv" on keyboard
other mistakes have been corrected by commenters above, try to learn from the comments!
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zhe ge nu=nv ren hen pang ye hen ai, Zhe ge nan ren shaui=shuai ye hen gao. zhe ge nan hai nain ji shao=nian ji xiao ye hen shou. zhe ge nu hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming. ni bu dan ai er qie shao=shou. wo shi gao ye pang.
这个女(nv)人很胖也很矮，这个男人帅（shuai)也很高，这个男孩。。。也很瘦。这个女孩非常漂亮而且聪明。你不但矮而且瘦(shou)。我是高也胖。写得不错，加油！
nu ren is nv ren when you type it.
what mean is the nain ji ?
I translated the chinese pingying you wrote into chinese characters.just for you reference.
zhe ge nu ren hen pang ye hen ai Zhe ge nan ren shaui(shou) ye hen gao. zhe ge nan hai nain ji shao(xiao) ye hen shou. zhe ge nu hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming. ni bu dan ai er qie shao(xiao). wo shi gao ye (er qie)pang. 这个女人很胖也很矮,这个男人瘦也很高.这个男孩年纪小也很瘦.这个女孩非常漂亮而且聪明.你不但矮而且小.我高而且胖.
xie xie ni men wo fei chang gao xing ren shi ni men. i will submit with Chinese characters when I can figure out how to get them to appear .
Perfect! I think you have been good enough at Pinyin. Please try do some pratices about Chinese characters, would you?
Good work! Your expression is very good, but it will be better if you make some small changes:
zhe ge nu ren hen pang ye hen ai ,zhe ge nan ren hen shuai ye hen gao .zhe ge nan hai nian ji xiao ye hen shou . zhe ge nu hai fei chang piao liang er qie cong ming. ni bu dan ke ai er qie nian ji xiao , wo hen gao ye hen pang !
懂汉字吗?
very good !
but you should may attention to the pronunciation about,"nv"ren not nu ren.
for the pronunciation of "nv"is very speacial in chinese.
keep moving!
Good.