Describing Objects
Instructions:
Using one positive and one negative statement, describe six objects (a car, a flower, a coin, a tree, a house, a purse). Ex. The house is black. It is not white.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 3
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我的房子是白色。这扇门是黑色的。这棵树是绿色的。这朵花是红色的。这朵花是黄色的。
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jiangyingMochapoints: 1013 | Teacher Score: 190 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
jiangyingMochapoints: 1013 | Teacher Score: 190 (0%)
叔叔说的非常的好,呵呵,加油呀!我支持你的.我是你的侄女．呵呵．我开 学了不能总聊了，上帝保佑你，也与你同在．God bless you , God with you Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ziyouzihuaMochapoints: 3045 | Teacher Score: 877 (0%)Good job! 我的房子是白色的。它的门是黑色的。 我们有一个庭院(garden)。 庭院(garden)里有绿色的树，还有红色和黄色的花。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536
我的房子是白色的。这扇门是黑色的。这棵树是绿色的。这朵花是红色的。这朵花是黄色的。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
ChynnaMochapoints: 107217 | Teacher Score: 103536
Great efforts!!!! Congratulations! Unit 1-3 and 4 provide the sample Chinese vocabulary. You develop the topic vividly in Chinese characters.Your writing is concise, fluent， beautiful, perfect and comprehensible. I really enjoy your description. Trying to keep your creative works as much as possible, I just made a minor change in the separate version. You may also get benefits from other helpful comments. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up and move forward with your friend team!!! Best wishes to you！ 非常好! 您能用汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内外的知识，创造中文句子。您的文字简明，流利，容易理解， 漂亮。为了尽量保留其创作价值，我修改了一点。您也可以从其他的评论中获益。非常感谢您！ 希望您能同您的朋友团队一道继续前进！向您祝贺！ Submitted over a year agoTranslate -
normanMochapoints: 1075 | Teacher Score: 372 (0%)Submitted over a year agoSpelling: -
ziyouzihuaMochapoints: 3045 | Teacher Score: 877 (0%)
wo de fang zi shi bai se de. 我 的 房 子 是 白 色 的。 ta de men shi hei si de . 它 的 门 是 黑 色 的。 wo men you yi ge ting yuan. 我 们 有 一 个 庭 院。 ting yuan li you lv si de shu , 庭 院 里 有 绿 色 的 树， hai you hong se he huang se de hua. 还 有 红 色 和 黄 色 的 花。 Submitted over a year agoTranslate
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