Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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这个女人年纪小和矮。那个男人年纪大和高。这个男孩儿很穷和年纪小。那个女孩儿富有和年纪小。你高和年纪小。我年纪大和很穷。
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这个女人年纪小个子矮。那个男人年纪大个子高。这个男孩儿很穷和年纪小。那个女孩儿富有和年纪小。你个子高和年纪小。我年纪大和很穷
good job
I think your chinese is pretty good .But you still a little mistake .You should change the "和"to '而且",so it will be read fluently .Continue effort .
OH..IT'S GOOD.
BUT U NEED TO KEEP EYE ON CONJUNCTION..IT WILL MAKE UR SENTENCE MORE SMOOTH.
WORK HARD!~!~!
这个女人年纪大个子矮。那个男人年纪大个子高。这个男孩儿很穷但是很年轻。那个女孩儿富有又年轻。你个子高又年纪小。我年纪大并且很穷。
这个女人矮，年纪小，那个男人高，年纪大。 这个男孩年纪小并且很穷。那个女孩年纪小且富有。你个子高，年纪小，我年纪大并且很穷。
very good
great!You can describe them clearly,and there is no error.but if you wanna to be more vividly and fit in with the Chinese speaking habits,you should say it like that:
这个女人年轻，个子矮。那个男人年纪大，个头高。这个男孩儿很穷，年纪小。那个女孩儿年轻而且富有。你身材高而且年轻。我年纪大，很穷。
In fact,"和" is used to connect with none,not with ajective.
You can use "而且" to connect with two good ones.
eg.(女人)年轻。身材高。富有
use "不过" to connect with a good one (in front of "不过")and a bad one.
eg.很穷不过年纪小，（男人）年纪大不过很穷。
you can say "The young girl is rich" .As same as in English,you could say"这个年轻的女孩儿很富有"or"这个年轻的女孩儿是富有的。"
她长得矮.
希望你能理解
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your Chinese is pretty good now, but there is a mistake,and Ivy give you the detail answer.Good job.
Very Good !
"男孩儿""女孩儿"is right,but it is used to "男孩""女孩" in chinese .For example "那个男孩很年轻，个子很高".
go on !!