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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

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那个男人不胖, 他很瘦。 这个女人不是美国人,她是英国人。 这个男孩不高,他很矮。 那个女孩是他们第一孩子, 不是第二。 你很老, 不小。 我很慢, 不快。
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  • jetoy
    Mochapoints: 209  |  Teacher Score: 71 (0%)

    那个女孩是他们第一孩子, 不是第二

    你很老, 不年轻。

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  • ricochet
    Mochapoints: 7008  |  Teacher Score: 6119 (98%)

    thanks

    不是 ”不年轻“吧?

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  • ricochet
    Mochapoints: 7008  |  Teacher Score: 6119 (98%)

    不是 ”不年轻“ 吧?

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  • ricochet
    Mochapoints: 7008  |  Teacher Score: 6119 (98%)

    sorry, don't know why that stupid "“" appears all the time, just ignore it.

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  • ikaros
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    不小——不年轻(it's better)

    我很慢(X)——我动作(or some other behavior you want to describe很慢

    that's good already.

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  • ikaros
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  • qhjin
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    那个男人不胖, 他很瘦。 这个女人不是美国人,她是英国人。 这个男孩个子不高,他很矮。 那个女孩是他们的第一孩子, 不是第二个孩子。 你很老了, 岁数不小了。 我跑得很慢, 一点也不快。

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  • 小胖*Yuun#
    Mochapoints: 513  |  Teacher Score: 139

    那个女孩是他们第一孩子, 不是第二。

    =〉那个女孩是他们的第一个孩子, 不是第二个。

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  • susi chen
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    女孩是他们的第一个孩子,其次不是。 您非常老(年龄是非常大的),不是年轻的。 我的速度是非常慢的,不是快的。

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  • ricochet
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    thanks for the comments

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  • Joyce
    Mochapoints: 3253  |  Teacher Score: 402 (0%)

    那个女孩是他们的第一个孩子,不是第二个。你很老,不年轻。我动作慢,反应不快。

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  • Fiona
    Mochapoints: 424  |  Teacher Score: 78 (0%)

    还不错啦,虽然有一些小毛病,继续加油~~

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  • darwinxie
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    那个女孩是他们第一(个)孩子,不是第二(个)。你很老,不 (年轻)。

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  • V {独孤求败}
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    这个女人不是美国人 而 是英国人。

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