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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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我驾驶汽车去上班。　 我有时去电影。
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  • rita
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  • rita
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    去电影院或者去看电影
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  • Julie
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  • vincent
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    应该是：我有时去 看 电影
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    我有时去电影院看电影！ 他问的是交通方面的问题，你只要回答他的问题即可
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  • Julie
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    Your answer "我有时去电影" does not meet the question. And in this sentance you lost a verb . It should be "我有时去看电影"。
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  • qhjin
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    我开车去上班,我有时去看电影.这是口语,中国人只有在书面表达时,才说驾驶.
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  • Shirlly
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    我有时去电影院。 或者说 我有时去看电影。
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  • aqisusu
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    “我有时去看电影”or“我有时去电影院” Not“我有时去电影”
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  • Tanna
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    "我有时去看电影" or "我有时去电影院"because "去"must go to some where but"电影"means film
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    把“我有时去电影”改成“我有时候去看电影”！但是你其实是不用说这句的，因为和问题没有关系！但你还是很棒的，加油！ Actually you don't mention this sentance“我有时去电影”,it makes no sense of this question anyway,you did a good job,keep moving,well done!
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  • monica
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    把“我有时去电影”改成“我有时候去看电影”！但是你其实是不用说这句的，因为和问题没有关系！但你还是很棒的，加油！ Actually you don't mention this sentance“我有时去电影”,it makes no sense of this question anyway,you did a good job,keep moving,well done!
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  • danlan
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    我开车去上班.
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  • Andy_xiaodu
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    You sentence is pretty good, but there is a grammar mistake in it. "I drive to work and sometimes I go to the cinema." right? I thinks the sentence should be"我开车去上班，有时，我去电影院。" The words"有时" should be in front of the "我" and you must add the "去" in front of the some place. You also say "我有时看电影”, The "看" is a verb and very necessary in this sentence to express " do sth". Got it?
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  • Hegenla
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    我开车去上班。有时候也会去看看电影
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  • yuhuahuiyu
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    we usually won't say 驾驶汽车，and it should go like "开车"，“开”can be an verb in oral Chinese.
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  • gdplaw
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    我开车去上班。我偶尔去看电影。 Description like this is more native.
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