Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise

Describing People and Objects

Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

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我有三 宠物。我有二猫和一条狗。一只猫是白色的。一只猫是黑色的和狗是黑色的。
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Submitted: 2008-03-15 13:38:16




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  • 2008-03-09 12:03:03
    monkey
    If you say like this will be better 我有三个宠物,一条黑色的狗,一只白色的猫和一只黑色的猫.
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  • 2008-03-09 12:04:44
    Little Bottle
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  • 2008-03-09 12:08:07
    Little Bottle
    表示个数的数词后面应该跟有量词, 应该说 “三只宠物”“两只猫” “和”字最好不用,改成“,(逗号)”
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  • 2008-03-09 12:20:16
    lw850625
    我有三个宠物,两只猫和一条狗。其中一只猫是白色的,一条狗和另一只猫是黑色的。
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  • 2008-03-09 12:26:00
    ziyouzihua
    wo you san zhi chong wu. wo you liang zhi bao 我 有 三 只 宠 物。我 有 两 只 猫 hai you yi tiao gou. yi zhi mao shi bai se de . 还 有 一 条 狗。 一只 猫 是 白 色 的。 ling yi zhi mao shi hei se de ,gou ye shi hei se 另 一 只 猫 是 黑 色 的, 狗 也 是 黑 色 de. 的。 Good job.
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  • 2008-03-09 12:32:23
    jianyangling
    pretty good! It is hardly to c written Chinese. But i think it would be better like following: 我有三(只)宠物:二(you'd better use"两")(只)猫和一条狗。一只猫是白色的,(另 it means another)一只猫(和狗都)是黑色的。
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  • 2008-03-09 12:33:03
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  • 2008-03-09 12:55:52
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  • 2008-03-09 12:56:31
    dreamwk
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  • 2008-03-10 00:01:34
    Chynna
    我有三 只宠物。我有二只猫和一条狗。一只猫是白色的。一只猫是黑色的。 狗也是黑色的。
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  • 2008-03-10 00:02:25
    Chynna
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  • 2008-03-10 00:03:07
    Chynna
    Great efforts!!!! Congratulations! Unit 1-4 and 5 provide the sample Chinese vocabulary. You develop the topic vividly in Chinese characters. It is amazing that you can write Chinese sentences after learning one lesson. Your writing is concise, fluent, beautiful, perfect and comprehensible. I really enjoy your description. Trying to keep your creative works as much as possible, I just made a minor change about the measure words in the separate version. You may also get benefits from other helpful comments. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up and move forward with your friend team!!! Best wishes to you! 非常好! 您的文字简明,流利,容易理解, 漂亮。为了尽量保留其创作价值,我修改了一点。您也可以从其他的评论中获益。非常感谢您! 希望您能同您的朋友团队一道继续前进!向您祝贺!
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  • 2008-03-15 13:38:16
    jiangying
    我又三只宠物。我有两只猫和一条狗,一只狗是白色的,另一只狗和猫都是黑色的。
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