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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 4

Describing People and Objects

Instructions: Describe people and objects, including both singular and plural forms. Use both positive and negative statements. Ex. We are women. We are not men. This is a gold coin. These are not yellow flowers.

phoquemyope's submission: Average Rating:
这些卡车不是黄色的。它们是红色的。这些女孩子没有紫色的花。她们的花是蓝色的。这是一辆红色的汽车。它不是棕色的。我们没有黑色的房子。我们的房子是白色的。这个男人的硬币不是金黄色的。它们是银色的。
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  • Novie
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  • Kate
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    good job!

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  • jeffwu5
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    写得很好,而且也没有任何可以找出毛病的地方.continue.

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  • apollo5288
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    这些卡车不是黄色的它们是红色的。这些女孩子没有紫色的花她们的花是蓝色的。这是一辆红色的汽车它不是棕色的。我们没有黑色的房子我们的房子是白色的。这个男人的硬币不是金黄色的它们是银色的。

    在形容同一个对象还没有结束时,最好用-逗号隔开。其它都很不错!加油!

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  • liudi
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    I think u did a great job there is nothing wrong with that and the only thing that needs to change is some of the full stops need to be changed to comma. And i saw some friend below already corrected for you.  very good job haha well done

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  • 珊瑚
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    很好 加油有

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  • gonnastop
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    yeahh...the comma...

     

    pay attention to punctuation marks.

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