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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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在我的书桌上是计算机、一些纸和咖啡杯子。在我的抽屉, 有一些文件和参考手册。
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  • Vivo
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  • Vivo
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    非常好， 在我的书桌上，有一台计算机，一些纸和咖啡杯子。 在我的抽屉里，有一些文件和参考手册。 DDD D D D D D D DDD OO O O O O O O O O OO OO O O O O O O O O OO G G G G G G GGGG G G G G
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    在我的书桌上是计算机、一些纸和咖啡杯子。在我的抽屉, 有一些文件和参考手册。
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  • Chynna
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    Great efforts!!!! Congratulations! You develop the topic vividly in Chinese characters. Your writing is concise, fluent， beautiful, and comprehensible. Trying to keep your creative works as much as possible, I just made a minor change in the separate version. You may also get benefits from other helpful comments. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up and move forward with your friend team!!! 非常好! 您的文字简明，流利，容易理解， 漂亮。为了尽量保留其创作价值，我修改了一点。您也可以从其他的评论中获益。非常感谢您！ 希望您能同您的朋友团队一道继续前进！
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  • fan xing
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    well done.I couldn't find any mistake.
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  • STORY
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  • STORY
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    在我的书桌上有一台计算机、一些纸和咖啡杯。 在我的抽屉里面有一些文件和参考手册。 ：）
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  • Anna
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    不错啊 在我的书桌上有计算机、一些纸和咖啡杯子。在我的抽屉里有一些文件和参考手册。 还有谢谢你给我点评的那么相信。
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  • Andy_xiaodu
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    Very good, I have a minor advice for you should add a word "里" behind the “抽屉” to express " in drawer". Well done and keep it on.
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  • kelly
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    good job!
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  • 林静怡
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    很好,继续努力.加油.
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  • tae
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    Well done , keep it up.
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  • Dong
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    Well done. Using 有 to replace 是 will be much better I think.
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  • 宋
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    well done
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  • Abby
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    perfect grammer and spelling! congratulation!
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    在我的书桌上是计算机、一些纸和咖啡杯子。在我的抽屉里, 有一些文件和参考手册。

      这样更好一点。
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  • skye chen
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    good!
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