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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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它喜欢演奏futbol 和吃的我的兄弟
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  • emily
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  • emily
    Mochapoints: 338  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
    mariana ta nian ji da , ta gao ,ta shou ,ta shi(hao ) nv ren 。 mariana , 她年纪大,她高,她瘦,她是(好)女人。
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  • bningweish
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  • bningweish
    Mochapoints: 2096  |  Teacher Score: 388 (0%)
    Mariana 是个年纪大,又高又瘦的(好)女人! Mariana shi ge nian ji da,you gao you shou de (hao)nu ren!
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  • 忘了几点
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    我是一个非常和蔼可亲和真诚的女孩。 不用 恳切
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  • atonshi
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  • Kevin_gu
    Mochapoints: 58  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
    Follow the title you can say... Marianita(you can change the subject)是一位非常富有、身体偏瘦的中年妇女。
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  • Sara
    Mochapoints: 803  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
    Good job!but I don't think "恳切"is use well in this scientice.you can say"我是一个非常和蔼可亲的女孩" that's will be ok!
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  • Nicole
    Mochapoints: 1463  |  Teacher Score: 43 (0%)
    和蔼可亲一般是描述年纪大点的人,所以你如果想要介绍你自己,你可以说我是一个开朗,善良,美丽,诚恳的女孩。
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  • LONG
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    我是一个非常可爱,诚恳的女孩.
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  • cyberhawk
    Mochapoints: 1529  |  Teacher Score: 391 (0%)
    Hello!Marinita,I don't know means that you say"它喜欢演奏futbol和吃的我的兄弟".I think you would say:"我的兄弟喜欢吃东西和演奏futbol". I don't know it what is futbol too.Could you tell me what is futbol? 很好,对于初学中文的你,继续努力。
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  • cyberhawk
    Mochapoints: 1529  |  Teacher Score: 391 (0%)
    Hello!Marinita,I don't know means what you say"它喜欢演奏futbol和吃的我的兄弟".I think you would say:"我的兄弟喜欢吃东西和演奏futbol". I don't know it what is futbol too.Could you tell me what is futbol? 很好,对于初学中文的你,继续努力。
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  • 秦骁
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  • 秦骁
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    这句话应该是:我的兄第,他喜欢演奏futbol,也喜欢美食。
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  • Chynna
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  • Chynna
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    我的兄弟喜欢踢足球和吃东西。
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    I guess you try to say," My brother likes to play football and to eat."
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  • milk
    Mochapoints: 635  |  Teacher Score: 33 (0%)
    My name is Vicky, I'm from China, i like listening music and watching movies. And i wanna learn French so i joined the Livemocha! 我的兄弟喜欢演奏futbol和美食``
    Submitted over a year ago

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