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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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当我是一个孩子，我梦想的工作是警官 。我是一名电工，现在。我喜欢这个工作，但我喜欢操作电脑最。计算机是非常有用的今天。
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  • 他乡客
    Mochapoints: 142  |  Teacher Score: 35 (0%)
    当我还是一个孩子的时候，我的梦想是成为一名警官。 现在,我是一名电工,我喜欢这个工作. 但我最喜欢操作电脑。
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  • Chynna
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    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    但我最喜欢操作电脑。今天计算机是非常有用的。
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  • Chynna
    Mochapoints: 107217  |  Teacher Score: 103536
    Congratulations! You did a very good job as a beginner! 1.This topic is based on the vocabulary and sentence patterns in Unit 1-6 about career and grammar (subject+shi+noun) 2. You use them to write about the topic in Chinese characters. 3. You also enhance your learning by using the sentence pattern, "当我是一个孩子时."“我喜欢..." 4. Your writing is concise, fluent, perfect and comprehensible except for a few things in the separate version. 5. It is amazing that you use the adverbial clause of time correctly before the main action. Thank you so much for the great work. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you！非常好! 您能用汉语文字清楚地表达熟悉的意思。您能在熟悉的题目下用课内的知识，创造中文句子。您使用的课文的句型和词汇很正确。我只作了一点修改。 在课内知识基础上，您可以学习其他的中文表达法，丰富您的汉语知识。非常感谢您。继续努力！我为您祝福！
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  • lonssun
    Mochapoints: 5479  |  Teacher Score: 1014 (78%)
    颠倒话,口语常用.
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  • 翡翠
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    当我还是一个孩子的时候，我的梦想是成为一名警官。 现在,我是一名电工,我喜欢这个工作. 但我最喜欢操作电脑，因为在今天电脑是非常有用的。 you really did a good job!
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  • Meijie
    Mochapoints: 10337  |  Teacher Score: 5723 (95%)
    oh! sorry I can't read it. Kan bu dong le.
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  • livedcha
    Mochapoints: 16  |  Teacher Score: 15 (0%)
    be aware the sequence of chinese! it should be : 当我是一个孩子的时候，.....现在,我是一名电工。...但z最我喜欢操作电脑。当今，计算机是非常有用的。
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  • winnie
    Mochapoints: 302  |  Teacher Score: 55 (0%)
    你应该这样说:当我是小孩子的时候,我梦想中的工作是做一名警官.我现在是一名电工,我非常喜欢这份工作,但我还是比较喜欢玩电脑,因为在现今电脑对我们的日常工作和生活是非常有用的.that'all.thank you!you have made a great progress in learning chinese actually.very good!go on.
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  • ziyouzihua
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  • ziyouzihua
    Mochapoints: 3045  |  Teacher Score: 877 (0%)
    当我还是一个孩子的时候，我的梦想是当一名警官。 我现在是一名电工。 我喜欢现在的工作，但我更喜欢操作电脑。 当今世界，计算机是非常有用的。
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  • jiangying
    Mochapoints: 1013  |  Teacher Score: 190 (0%)
    当我是一个孩子 的时候，我梦想的工作是警官。现在我是一名电工。我喜欢这个工作，但我最喜欢操作电脑，因为在今天计算机是非常有用的。
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