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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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我的桌子上有一台电脑，两本书，和一个苹果。
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  • 月色撩人
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    很好
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  • Tyler Banks
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    写的不错, GOOD JOB. 加油,,
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    Good job! 你写的很好！祝你学习愉快。
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  • Helen_Yang
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    Well done!But the second '，' is unnecassery.
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  • chiaki
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    您写得很好。祝您不断进步！
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  • powelle
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    Your describe is very good.
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  • redskyhu
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    我的桌子上有一台电脑，两本书和一个苹果。 （“和”前面不用加逗号“，”）
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  • Geui fang
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    You are so good. Your pronunciation is right. You will get better if you can write some other things. Your Chinese is great if you can read it. Best luck!
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  • Geui fang
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    You are so good. Your pronunciation is right. You will get better if you can write some other things. Your Chinese is great if you can read it. Best luck!
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  • Geui fang
    Mochapoints: 8611  |  Teacher Score: 496 (0%)
    You are so good. Your pronunciation is right. You will get better if you can write some other things. Your Chinese is great if you can read it. Best luck!
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  • Geui fang
    Mochapoints: 8611  |  Teacher Score: 496 (0%)
    You are so good. Your pronunciation is right. You will get better if you can write some other things. Your Chinese is great if you can read it. Best luck!
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  • 黄
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    你要表达的意思很清楚，但是有点小小的语法问题，和前面没有逗号，应该是：我的桌子上有一台电脑，两本书和一个苹果。
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