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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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Women shi xuesheng, bu shi yisheng. Ta shi jingguan, bu shi gonggong qiche siji. Zhege nvren shi hushi. Nage nanren shi wo de tongshi.
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  • Never Give Up
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    good.

    请用汉字书写。

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  • Hongli
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    wo men shi xue sheng, bu shi yi sheng. Ta shi jing guan, bu shi gong gong qi che si ji. zhe ge nv ren shi hu shi. na shi ge nan renshi wo de tongshi.

    Chinese pinyinThe first letter not capitalized!!!

    Great job!!!

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  • liangxiongqi
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    wo men shi yi wei xue sheng , bu shi yi sheng, ta shi  jingguan yi wei  yisheng, bu shi gonggong pi che si ji,  zhe ge nvren nan ren shi hushi  yi wei lao shi, Na  na ge nan ren cai shi wo de tong  lao shi .

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  • Joseph
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    很好Robert 继续加油.

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  • Isabel
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    every single word take a sit

    don't like this "women",it should be "wo men"

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  • jump26
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    very good!

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  • Sophie
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    I agree  Hongli!!!

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  • gxdbeanbeaneye
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    Well done. Now I give you my Chinese about writing.

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

    and I also record my voice for you. you could refer what I speak.

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  • 幽幽
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    Very good.In Chinese you can write them down like this:

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

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  • 幽幽
    Mochapoints: 15650  |  Teacher Score: 2204

    Very good.In Chinese you can write them down like this:

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

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  • tonydeng
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      Hi~Robert! Long time no see, How are you doing recently!~ The practice is well done, I think of it~Just if you writed it by Chinese, I consider is better!

    Wo men shi xuesheng, bu shi yisheng. Ta shi

     我    们    是     学 生j,   不  是    医 生。 他  是Jingguan, bu shi gonggong qiche siji.

      警官,     不   是    公  共        汽车  司机。Zhege nvren shi hushi.  Nage  nanren shi  wo

      这个    女人     是  护士。 那个     男 人    是   我

    de   tongshi.

    的      同 事。

    Okay, Robert!~ I hope it can help you~

     

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  • 卜果
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    great~ keep doing~hehe

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  • Crystal
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    good a job!

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  • Steven Lee
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    very good ! keep it on

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  • freemum555
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    so beautiful

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  • freemum555
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    so beautiful

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  • freemum555
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    so beautiful

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  • freemum555
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    so beautiful

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  • william Brennem...
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    Good job! and you can learn the words as follow.

    我们是学生,不是医生。他是警官,不是公共汽车司机。这个女人是护士。那个男人是我的同事。

    and you'd better write these words like this.

    wo men (we) xue sheng (students) yi sheng (doctor) jing guan (police offericer) gong gong qi che si ji (bus driver) zhe ge(this) nv ren(woman) na ge (that) nan ren (man) tong shi (colleague)

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  • eason.run
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    good job

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  • Cathy
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    perfect, keep working!

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  • bluself
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    Try to use Chinese spelling

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  • Candy
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    很好...Very good!!

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  • brave heart
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    great!

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  • brave heart
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    great!

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  • brave heart
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    nin  neng shi yong han zi ma ?

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  • brave heart
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    nin  neng shi yong han zi ma ?

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  • James
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    buen trabajo! But when you spell the pinyin, pay attention to the intervals. see:

    Wo men shi xue sheng, bu shi yi sheng. Ta shi jing guan, bu shi gong gong qi che si ji. Zhe ge nv ren shi hu shi. Na ge nan ren shi wo de tong shi.

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  • Zibs
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    You probably have reasons of work-flow for the pinyin, but I couldn't help wanting to share these...sorry, I just get excited & have to share 'em with someone! -http://www.chinese-tools.com/tools/ime.html (no-download-or-diacriticals character entry)

    also www.chineseetymology.org (wonderfully easy-to-get-at character etymology)

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