Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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新西兰和中国的教育体制有几个不同的方式。新西兰的学校通常开始在上午8：45 和三点一刻放学，而中国学校通常开始。。。和结束在。。。
多数学生在中国也有课外的教训并且有帮助的私人教师他们在学校改进他们的标记。在新西兰，这不是实际情形。学生需要时间演奏体育或其他课外活动，而不是花费时间专人上课。对此，我觉得中国的教育体制是强烈和投入更多压力在学生与比较新西兰的教育体制。
The education system between NZ and China is quite different in several ways. Schools in NZ usually start at 8:45am and finish at 3:15pm, whereas Chinese schools start at _ and finish around_. Most students in China also have afterschool lessons and have private tutors to help them improve their marks at school. In NZ, this is not the case; students take time to play sports or other extra curriculums rather than spend their time afterschool having private lessons. In this respect, I think the education system in China is much more intense and put more pressure on the students compared to the NZ students.
please guys help me fix up my chinese
thanx a lot :-)
多数学生在中国也有课外的教训并且有帮助的私人教师他们在学校改进他们的标记。在新西兰，这不是实际情形。学生需要时间演奏体育或其他课外活动，而不是花费时间专人上课。对此，我觉得中国的教育体制是强烈和投入更多压力在学生与比较新西兰的教育体制。
The education system between NZ and China is quite different in several ways. Schools in NZ usually start at 8:45am and finish at 3:15pm, whereas Chinese schools start at _ and finish around_. Most students in China also have afterschool lessons and have private tutors to help them improve their marks at school. In NZ, this is not the case; students take time to play sports or other extra curriculums rather than spend their time afterschool having private lessons. In this respect, I think the education system in China is much more intense and put more pressure on the students compared to the NZ students.
please guys help me fix up my chinese
thanx a lot :-)
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你的主题不对.
But you have viewpoint by yourself.
新西兰和中国的教育体制在几个方面截然不同。新西兰的学校通常在上午8：45 开始，下午三点一刻放学。而中国则通常在。。。开始，在。。。结束。多数中国学生有课后作业并且上家教课，以提高他们的考试分数。在新西兰却不是这样。学生们在课余时间参加体育活动或学习其他的课程。花在上家教课的时间很少。从这个角度看，我认为，和新西兰比，中国的教育体制非常严格，给学生增加了更多的压力。
I don't agree with you,Though students in china have to do more afterschool lessons ,they also take their time to play sports after school. such as me for example, I often take my son to play ping-pang in our sparetime .
有些地方语序有些不顺，表达不顺畅，但整体很好
写的不错！
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