What are people going to do?
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.
在新西兰的最响誉的符号大厦是天空塔。它位于中央奥克兰。从全世界参观的许多游人来看天空塔。在中国，最显耀的大厦是中国长城。中国长城是你参观的其中一个第一个地方你什么时候去旅行的中国。
Best-known symbolic building in NZ is the sky tower. It’s located in central Auckland. Many tourists from all over the world visit the sky tower. In China, the most renowned building is the Great Wall of China. It’s one of the first places that you visit when you go to China for travel.
please correct any errors! thanx!!!
Submitted over a year ago
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise 
最显耀的"建筑"，it is not 大厦
中国长城是你参观的其中一个地方
你什么时候去中国旅行的。
very good,pls pay attention to the construction:
在新西兰的最响誉的符号大厦是天空塔。它位于中央奥克兰。从全世界参观的许多游人来看天空塔(来自于世界各地的许多游人来参观天空塔)。在中国，最显耀的大厦(建筑)是中国长城。中国长城是你参观的其中一个第一个地方你什么时候去旅行的中国(你什么时候到中国来施行,中国长城是首选地之一)。 Best-known symbolic building in NZ is the sky tower. It’s located in central Auckland. Many tourists from all over the world visit the sky tower. In China, the most renowned building is the Great Wall of China. It’s one of the first places that you visit when you go to China for travel. please correct any errors! thanx!!!
My advise as a reference:Your translation isn't anthentic, and it is easily mistaken by readers.Because you confuse the order of words in a sentance between english and chinese.You write well,but you need continue to learn grammar and translation skill.主要就是翻译的不地道，而且句子有歧义
Everygood
Best-known symbolic building in NZ is the sky tower. 在新西兰最有名的建筑是天空塔。
It’s located in central Auckland. 它位于奥克兰中央。
Many tourists from all over the world visit the sky tower. 来自世界各地的游人前来参观天空塔。
In China, the most renowned building is the Great Wall of China.在中国，最富盛名的建筑是长城。
It’s one of the first places that you visit when you go to China for travel. 它是你去中国旅行的首选之地。
拼字很不错，但语法尚需努力。
加油！
在新西兰的最富盛名响誉的符号大厦标志性建筑是天空塔。它位坐落于中央奥克兰市中心。参观天空塔的游客来自世界各地。在中国，最著名的建筑是中国长城。中国长城也是你去中国旅游第一个要去的地方。
不错，加油哦～不要偷懒把英文直接放在Google翻译中翻成中文哦
在新西兰最有名的建筑是天空塔。它位于奥克兰的中央。许多来自各国的游人都会去参观天空塔。例如在中国，最有名的建筑是长城。当你去中国旅游的时候，这会是你来中国参观的其中一处旅游胜地。
在新西兰的最显誉的建筑大厦是天空塔。它位于中央的奥克兰。从全世界参观的许多游人来看天空塔。在中国，最显耀的大厦是中国万里长城。中国万里长城是你参观的第一个，中国其中一个地方你什么时候去旅行的中国。
写的很好
加油！
very good
excellent, you are extraordinary