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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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这个女人七点半吃早饭。
这个男人八点钟去办公室。
这个女孩七点钟去学校。
这个男孩差一刻五点回家。
你六点一刻醒来。
我十点半睡觉。
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  • shsanglili
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    1.”去办公室”一般用“去上班”

    2.“差一刻五点”一般直接说“4:45”

    3.“醒来”一般说“起床”

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  • Liz
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    I agree with shsanglili

    Keep it up !

    Liz

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  • Snigdha
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    到家

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  • alice_xmj
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    这个男孩五点差一刻回家。

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  • yoyo
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    非常不错,加油!

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  • Rachel
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    good

     

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  • bill.zhao
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    ok!

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  • sunny
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    VERY GOOD!

    COME ON!

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  • 小雨
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    挺好的,如果你能把六个人的活动串在一起,编一个小故事,会更有趣些。

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  • Nancy
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    Great job!

    这个男孩五点差一刻回家。or

    这个男孩下午4:45 分回家。

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  • sina0083
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    good

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  • Rao Aimei
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    There is no any error in your writing exercise.

    Great!!!!!

    I'd like give you ten stars!

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  • Eileen
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    这个女人七点半吃早饭。这个男人八点钟去办公室。这个女孩七点钟去学校。这个男孩五点差一刻回家。你六点一刻醒来。我十点半睡觉。

    very good!come on!

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  • Eileen
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  • Eileen
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    应该是五点差一刻

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  • Cami
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    您所说一刻的意思是什么?5分钟?还是10分钟?

    这个女人七点半吃早饭 (餐)。这个男人八点钟去办公室。这个女孩七点钟去学校。这个男孩差一刻五点(4点55分)回家。你六点一刻(6点05分)醒来。我十点半睡觉。

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