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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 5

How many objects?

Instructions: Write about a number of different objects. Which people have which object? How many of each do different people have? EX. The girl has twenty-five flowers and seven candles.

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三个女人坐在桌子边,每一个有很多花。
第一个女人有十五朵白色花,二十朵红色花。
第二个女人有三十朵桔黄色花,五朵紫色花。
第三个女人有三十五朵黑色花。她是一点怪诞的女人。
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  • NiAi
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    她是一点怪诞的女人。"她是一个有一点怪诞的女人。”

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  • Liz
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    Well done ! Jimmy , all is fine to me except the last sentence , we ususally don't say like that . using ' 奇怪' would be better .

    I correct your exercise , you can compare it .

    三个女人坐在桌子边,每个人都有很多朵花。 第一个女人有十五朵白色的花,二十朵红色的花、第二个女人有三十朵 桔黄色的花,五朵紫色的花。第三个女人有三十五朵黑色的花,她真是个奇怪的女人。

    Keep it up !

    Liz

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  • CHIYING
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    三个女人坐在桌子边,她们每一个有很多花。第一个女人有十五朵白色花,二十朵红色花。第二个女人有三十朵桔黄色花,五朵紫色花。第三个女人有三十五朵黑色花。她是一点怪诞的女人。

    Jimmy,  in Chinese, between an adjective and a noun, there is a "". please pay more attention for it. 

    I believe you could show us more interesting sentences. I am waiting for them.

    Good night!

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  • Remon
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    Perfect!  Just keep it up!

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  • mini
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    注意组词

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