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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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暑假我要去很多地方。第一个地放是德克萨斯州。那有一个好朋友。我们有很好的关系。在那我要吃出名的牛排，汉堡包，和烤肉。第二个地方是加州。在加州我有一些家人。加州有很好的购物中心。哪个地方有很多海滩。很多人晒太阳。所以我参加和看看人晒晒。我觉得在海滩很舒服。第三个地方是纽约。在纽约有很多好吃的餐厅。
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  • Maple
    Mochapoints: 1916  |  Teacher Score: 530

    我们关系很好。那个地方。
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  • Jane
    Mochapoints: 12388  |  Teacher Score: 1434 (100%)

    暑假我要去很多地方。第一个地放方是德克萨斯州。那有一个我的好朋友。我们有很好的关系很好。在那我要吃出名的牛排，汉堡包，和烤肉。第二个地方是加州。在加州我有一些家人。加州有很好的购物中心。哪那个地方有很多海滩。很多人晒太阳。所以我也想参加和看看人晒晒太阳。我觉得在海滩很舒服。第三个地方是纽约。在纽约有很多好吃的餐厅有好吃的东西。
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  • Sweety - 慧凌
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    我有一个好朋友在那里。我们的关系很好 。我要吃那里出名的牛排，汉堡包，和烤肉。我有一些家人在加州。那个地方有很多海滩。所以我参加和看人晒太阳。

    哇，你的暑假很有趣！
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  • V {独孤求败}
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