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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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那些是五块毛巾, 两块毛巾是绿色的, 三块是黑色的。我有七根蜡烛, 四根是红色的,两根是黄色的,一根是白色的。这些是六条小狗。 两条狗是胖, 四条是瘦。 我要三块蛋糕。 你要两朵花吗?
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  • diana jin
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    very good,keep on!

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  • 文璐
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    两条狗胖, 四条瘦。

    Excellent job! Congratulations!

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  • 叶子
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    里有五条毛巾,其中毛巾是绿色的, 三是黑色的。我有七根蜡烛, 四根是红色的,两根是黄色的,一根是白色的。这里有六条小狗。 两条狗是胖, 四条是瘦。 我要三块蛋糕。 你要两朵花吗?

    写的很好!继续加油!

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  • numb
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    这些是六小狗。 两胖, 四条是瘦。

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  • Maggie
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    那些是五毛巾, 两毛巾是绿色的, 三是黑色的。我有七根蜡烛, 四根是红色的,两根是黄色的,一根是白色的。这些是六条小狗。 两条狗是胖, 四条是瘦。 我要三块蛋糕。 你要两朵花吗?

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  • 朴菸
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    这些是六小狗。 两条狗胖, 四条瘦。

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  • ngoc
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    兒有毛巾, 两是绿色的, 另外的是黑色的。 我有七根蜡烛, 四根是红色的,两根是黄色的,一根是白色的。 这裡有小狗。 只有两是胖, 其他的是瘦的。 我要三块蛋糕。 你要两朵花吗?

    Very good! Keep going!

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  • Joseph
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    这些是六条狗, 其中两条够有点胖,四条比较瘦。

    That‘s better. anyway, this text  is very good.

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  • augustviolahow
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    字面上没有任何问题,只是要求上面的否定形式没有写出来,只要你在动一下小脑经在--是--之前加上一个--不--字 那么你的作业就是满分了,hurry up toi toi toi

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  • haoyi
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    不错,加油。

    very good.

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  • haoyi
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    GO for it.

    Submitted over a year ago

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