Describing Objects
Instructions:
Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1
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灯在桌子上, 花在盒子里。 箱子在桌子上, 糖果在盒子里。这个女人坐在桌子上, 女孩在箱子里。一个箱子在桌子上, 钱在盒子里。钱在桌子上, 咖啡在箱子里。
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very good！ keep going like this!
So you are learning Chinese. I guess you are a junior, because these sentences are really very simple, basic, I mean. However, progress is to be expected. Good luck, my friend.
If you have any problem, I can be your resource. Chinese is my mother tongue.
Excellent ! It seems a little hard to find any errors in your submission. Keep going !
写的不错, 基本上没有大的错误. 尝试一些复杂的句子将对你的写作有帮助.
继续努力!
A very good beginning!!
keep on working~^^
Very good, Keep it up.
灯在桌子上, 花在盒子里。 箱子在桌子上, 糖果在盒子里。这个女人坐在桌子上, 女孩在箱子里。一个只箱子放在桌子上, 钱在盒子里。钱在桌子上, 咖啡在箱子里。
Hi Byron, you are doing great job! Go go!
good!
Literarily, what you've written was absolutely right. Only a sentence, however, doesn't make sense. So I suggest you correct "这个女人坐在桌子上, 女孩在箱子里。" into "这个女人坐在椅子上, 女孩在房子里。"
very good！
Great job! Congratulations!
这个女人坐在桌子上, 女孩在箱子里。( It's right. )
这个女人坐在桌子旁, 那个女孩躲在箱子里。
（Maybe it's better. ）
Keep up the wonderful work!
I´m looking forward to your next exercise.
加油~
Good job!
一个女人坐在桌子上，桌上有灯、有钱、有箱子，箱子里有一个女孩，还有一杯咖啡。
盒子里有花，也（又）有糖果，还装着钱。
Byron！
你写得非常好，语音很通顺，基本上没有病句。加油哟！very good！
very good, Byron.
no comment to correct
很棒。加油。