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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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zhe ge nan ren phang he fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da he chiong. Na ge nu hai nian ji xiao he gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai he phang. Wo shi nu hai he chiong. Ni shi gao he fu you.
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  • Victoria
    Mochapoints: 161  |  Teacher Score: 52 (0%)

    i am sorry but i barely can understand you.

    there are not  "chiong  phang "these  words in Chinese.

     

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  • zbxiao
    Mochapoints: 881  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    pang is not phang

    don't understand çhiong'

    don't understand 'ni shi gao he fu you''

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  • Rainnie
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  • 辛姣(Silence)
    Mochapoints: 303  |  Teacher Score: 136 (0%)

    What do you want to say? You can Write it in English and I can help translate it in Chinese,Ok?  Come on!

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  • 辛姣(Silence)
    Mochapoints: 303  |  Teacher Score: 136 (0%)

    What do you want to say? You can Write it in English and I can help translate it in Chinese,Ok?  Come on!

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  • leon
    Mochapoints: 8604  |  Teacher Score: 5250

    zhe ge nan ren phang ,he fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da ,he chiong. Na ge nu hai nian ji xiao ,he gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai he phang. Wo shi nu hai he chiong. Ni shi gao he fu you.

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  • MODian
    Mochapoints: 3629  |  Teacher Score: 68 (0%)

    zhe ge nan ren PANG he fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da he QIONG. Na ge NV hai nian ji xiao he gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai he PANG. Wo shi NV hai he QIONG. Ni shi gao he fu you.

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  • Jessica
    Mochapoints: 415  |  Teacher Score: 26 (0%)

    It´s OK.But I don´t understand what is "phang""chiong".Maybe "pang""zhong"?And "gao""fu you"etc. is adj. ,so you can use it after "ni""wo""ta". 

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  • Emma
    Mochapoints: 8188  |  Teacher Score: 362 (0%)

    phang:pang

    chiong:qiong

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  • xin
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  • nancy
    Mochapoints: 214  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    请用英语

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  • mars
    Mochapoints: 2401  |  Teacher Score: 67 (0%)

    zhe ge nan ren pang he fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da he qiong. Na ge nv hai nian ji xiao he gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai he pang. Wo shi nv hai he qiong. Ni shi gao he fu you.

    (这个男人胖和富有。那个男人年纪大和穷。 那个女孩年纪小和高。 这个男孩矮和胖。 我是女孩和穷。 你是高和富有。)

    It is better to use Chinese symbol.

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  • rogxymix
    Mochapoints: 778  |  Teacher Score: 152 (0%)

    zhe ge nan ren phang hen fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji dan hen qiong. Na ge nv hai nian jing hen gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai hen pang. Wo shi nv hai hen qiong. Ni shi gao hen fu you.

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  • rogxymix
    Mochapoints: 778  |  Teacher Score: 152 (0%)

    zhe ge nan ren phang hen fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji dan hen qiong. Na ge nv hai nian jing hen gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai hen pang. Wo shi nv hai hen qiong. Ni shi gao hen fu you.

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  • Trancy
    Mochapoints: 7292  |  Teacher Score: 3639 (100%)

    zhe ge nan ren phang he fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da he chizhong. Na ge nu hai nian ji xiao he gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai he phang. Wo shi nvu hai he   qie chizhong   . Ni shi gao he fu you.

    good job.

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  • 王韦
    Mochapoints: 1389  |  Teacher Score: 222 (0%)

    I don't understand you very well. Maybe you can give me informations in English.

    he (and) right? But  we always say that zhe ge nan ren hen(very)pang dan(but )hen(very)fu you.

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  • sunglow
    Mochapoints: 1427  |  Teacher Score: 39 (0%)

    we often use"pang" to say someone is fat,not "phang".to say someone is poor,we use "qiong",not "chiong".we use "ta"instead of "he" or "she".and we say "girl"— "nv hai"

    Zhe ge nan ren pang , ta fu you .

    Na ge nan ren nian ji da , ta qiong .

    Na ge nv hai nian ji xiao , ta gao .

    Zhe ge  nan hai ai , ta pang .

    Wo shi nv hai , ta qiong .

    Ni gao . ta fu you .

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  • Jane
    Mochapoints: 10120  |  Teacher Score: 3107 (100%)

    Bu cuo. Some spell I can't understand:

    zhe ge nan ren phang (pang, fat?) he fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da he chiong (zhong, heavy?). Na ge nu hai nian ji xiao he gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai he phang. Wo shi nu hai he chiong (zhong?). Ni shi gao he fu you

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  • Rosy
    Mochapoints: 852  |  Teacher Score: 216 (0%)

    hen fu you not he fu you;

    hen qiong not he chiong;

    nv hai not nu hai; hen gao not he gao;

    wo shi nv hai hen qiong;

    ni shi gao he fu you??  I can get this sentence

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  • Rosy
    Mochapoints: 852  |  Teacher Score: 216 (0%)

    hen fu you not he fu you;

    hen qiong not he chiong;

    nv hai not nu hai; hen gao not he gao;

    wo shi nv hai hen qiong;

    ni shi gao he fu you??  I can get this sentence

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  • isabelle
    Mochapoints: 220  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)

    这个男人胖并且富有。

    那个男人年纪大并且穷。na ge  nan ren  nian ji da bing qie qiong.

    那个女孩年轻并且高。na ge nv hai nian qing bing qie gao.

    you want to say "phang-fat.chiong-poor."right?

     

    这个男孩矮并且胖。zhe ge nan hai ai bing qie pang.

    我是女孩并且穷。wo shi nv hai bing qie qiong.

    你高并且富有。ni gao bing qie fu you.

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  • **Ajou**
    Mochapoints: 198111  |  Teacher Score: 169887 (74%)

    Zhe ge nan ren pang, ta fu you. Na ge nan ren nian ji da, ta chiong. Na ge nu hai nian ji xiao, ta gao. Zhe ge nan hai ai pang. Wo shi nu hai. wo qiong. Ni gao, ni fu you.

    You should practice more!!

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  • kris2987
    Mochapoints: 2174  |  Teacher Score: 599 (100%)

    xie xie da jia for your comment,

    what I meant with phang is "pang" , chiong "qiong" and he " and"...

    I guess it's better to use hanzi than pinyin but I don't have it in my computer, can somebody help me with this aplication?..just give me a buzz...please...^_^

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  • Huang Baoxian
    Mochapoints: 3639  |  Teacher Score: 133 (0%)

    try writing in chinese instead of han yu pin yin (汉语拼音). don't know what u mean by "phang" and "chiong".

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