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Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 1

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Instructions: Using the words from this lesson, describe the items that can usually be found in your shopping cart or basket. Include the number of units for each grocery item. Ex: two cartons of milk, some vegetables, a dozen eggs.

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我的上个假期
昨天是新年,我和大家庭都去MONAS,是一个国家历史文物,玩儿玩儿。MONAS 离我家不太远,坐共车只花15分钟,又方便又不花多钱!到那儿,我们就买乳脂糖,hmm 真好吃!弟弟说这种糖是他总是在小学买的。
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  • fecility0522
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  • GuGu
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    您好!您没有按照题目要求给出答案,只是重复了题目。
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  • chen
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    您上次在哪度假,离您家多远,到那儿要花多少钱? Above is better.
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  • sophia
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    您的上个假期是在哪里渡过的?它离您的家有多远?到那儿要花费多少钱? 继续努力吧!
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    冒得道德 真滴是要不得
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  • Chynna
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    Happy Holiday! 祝您节日快乐! http://www.123greetings.com/events/christmas_world_day/chinese/chinese3.html
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  • Chynna
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    A fantastic job! You are able to write about the topic with significant precision and detail. You develop your idea very well. Your Chinese is clear. It is so vivid. You show remarkable ease in the use of Chinese expressions with good control of grammatical structures. I have a minor change in the following version. Thank you so much for the fantastic work. I enjoy your writing. Please keep it up. Best wishes to you! 非常好! 您能精确和细仔地写有关题目。您发展了主题。您的描写是很生动的。您的中文简明, 流利,基本正确。非常感谢您。继续努力!我为您祝福!
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  • Chynna
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    Loyal to your original version, I just change a little; 昨天是新年,我和大家庭都去MONAS 玩儿玩儿。 那是一个国家历史文物。MONAS 离我家不太远,坐公车只花15分钟,又方便又不花很多钱!到那儿,我们就买乳脂糖,hmm。 真好吃!弟弟说他在小学总是买这种糖。
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  • iris gao
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    坐公共汽车,花钱又不多,弟弟说这种糖他小学时总买的。
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  • greykhwp
    Mochapoints: 111  |  Teacher Score: 10 (0%)
    嗯。。。没有题目?你所写的(大家庭)是指(family)吗?如果是,写(家人)比较容易明白。有约你心仪的男生吗? ;-)
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