Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise

What are people doing?

Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. I am eating food at the table. I am not sleeping in bed.

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fox
我 工 作,我 不 睡 觉.
妇 女 吃 着,她 不 睡 觉.
男 孩 使 用,他 不 工 作。
女 孩 微 笑 着,她 不 哭 泣。
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Submitted: 2009-10-11 13:44:11




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  • 2009-10-05 06:17:55
    々灿烂の女孩

    “男 孩 使 用”,what  it  means?you can say :男孩使用电脑      it means the boy uses the computer!

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  • 2009-10-05 06:18:16
    RAIN小麦。
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    very good,!

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  • 2009-10-05 07:03:10
    bagatvr
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    我不是在睡觉,我在工作。这个女人不是在睡觉,她在吃饭。那个男孩不是在工作着,他在休息。女孩不是在哭泣,她微笑着。

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  • 2009-10-05 07:10:29
    xuanyi

    you may say

    我 在 工 作, 没 有 睡 觉. 这 个 妇 女 吃 着 东 西,她 也 没 有 睡 觉. 男 孩 正 在 玩,他 没 有 工 作。女 孩 微 笑 着,她 没 有 哭 泣。

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  • 2009-10-05 14:08:00
    Sophie
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    我在工作,我不睡觉。这个妇女正在吃饭,她也没在睡。 男孩在玩,没有在工作。女孩微笑着,没有在哭泣。

    Good job!

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  • 2009-10-05 14:56:24
    ryuusiyuu

    '使用' 通常 作为 及物动词(transitive verb) 来 用.

    '使用' usually be used as transitive verb

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  • 2009-10-05 15:47:25
    learner

    sorry I can't understand chinese

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  • 2009-10-05 15:48:23
    Becker Loong/Ma...
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    我 工 作,我 不 睡 觉妇 女 女人在东西,她 不 睡 觉男 孩 使 用???,他 不 工 作。 女 孩 微 笑 着,她没哭

    have more practice!

    cheers!

    Becker.

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  • 2009-10-06 03:48:08
    wendy
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    我正在工作,我不睡觉.   妇女正在吃饭。她不睡觉. 男 孩正在玩,他 不 工 作。女 孩 正在微 笑 ,她 没有 哭 泣。

    Keep going !

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  • 2009-10-06 06:17:58
    jason(小林)

    要修改的,都修改好了!

    加油!

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  • 2009-10-06 09:02:15
    JEAN
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    妇 女 吃 着the what?男 孩 使 用then what?

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  • 2009-10-06 11:10:22
    soul dream
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    男孩使用……?使用what?

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  • 2009-10-06 12:27:31
    linda
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  • 2009-10-06 15:03:28
    Allen
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    We Chinese seldom say " 妇女吃着". We usually say "妇女在吃饭" OR "妇女没有在吃饭"。Despite of that, you have really done a great jod!

    Keep on working on your Chinese~

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  • 2009-10-06 15:05:35
    shujian
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  • 2009-10-06 20:39:51
    **Ajou**
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    工作,我睡觉。这个妇女正在吃饭,她也没睡觉。 男孩在玩,他不工作。女孩微笑,没在哭泣。

    Very good work. It is easy to understand. Keep it working!!

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  • 2009-10-07 20:25:59
    learner

    sorry I can't understand chinese

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  • 2009-10-08 05:43:29
    sea
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    我 工 作,我 不 睡 觉. 妇 女 ,她 不 睡 觉. 男 孩 使 用(这里应该加上他所使用的东西 比如“男孩在用电脑”),他 不 工 作。女 孩 微 笑 着,她 不 哭 泣。

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  • 2009-10-11 13:44:11
    漪莲银美

    我在工作不是在睡觉,妇女在吃饭不是在睡觉,男孩在玩不在工作,女孩在微笑没有哭泣。

    you said"男孩在使用”(the boy is using)but you didn't figure out"he is using what",and you can use"在。。。。不在。。。”to join twe sentences into one when they have the same subject.

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