Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
Mandarin Chinese Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao.
ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!
ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang
zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong
wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai
ni bu fu you, ni qiong
ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!
ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang
zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong
wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai
ni bu fu you, ni qiong
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zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da
this comma is extra~
Good job!
zhe ge nuv ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge nuv ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren gao,ta gao. ta shi nan ren ai ,ta ai! ta bu shi nan hai ,ta shou, ta shi pang. zhe ge nuv hai bu fu you, zhe ge nuv hai qiong .wo bu shi nuv hai,wo gao. wo shi nuv hai,wo ai. ni bu fu you, ni qiong .
zhe ge nu(nv) ren, (remove the mark) de nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu(nv) ren de nian ji xiao. ta bu shi (mei you)nan ren gao, ta shi (bi)nan ren ai! ta bu shi (mei you)nan hai shou, ta shi (hen)pang .zhe ge nu(nv) hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong .wo bu shi (mei you)nu hai gao, wo shi (bi)nu hai ai. ni bu fu you, ni qiong .
zhe ge nv ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge nv ren nian ji xiao; ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai! (ta ge zi bu gao,ta de ge zi hen ai) , zhe ge nan hai bu shou, ta hen pang; zhe ge nv hai bu fu you, ta hen qiong, wo shi nv hai. wo ge zi bu gao; ni bu fu you, ni hen qiong.
good
ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!
what do you want to say?
Do you want to say that woman is shorter than man? yes or no?
zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai! ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai ni bu fu you, ni qiong
zhe ge nv ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nv ren nian ji xiao. ta mei you nan ren gao, ta bi nan ren ai! ta mei you nan hai shou, ta pang. zhe ge nv hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong. wo mei you nu hai gao, wo bi nu hai ai. ni bu fu you, ni qiong
Ta bu bi nan ren gao,ta bi nan ren ai.……，you should change the "shi" to "bi"
honestly i don't understand some sentence
zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren gao,(ta shi nan hai,ta bu gao) ta shi nan ren ai! ta bu shi nan hai shou,(ta shi nan hai,ta bu shou) ta shi pang (ta hen pang)zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi nu hai gao, (wo shi nu hai,wo bu gao)wo shi nu hai ai ni bu fu you, ni qiong
miao shu de hai bu cuo <very good>!
good job! not nu,nv 女，maybe you can say:ta mei you nan ren gao~
good job !加油！！
zhe ge nu ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi nan ren (nan ren =man)(gao =tall), ta shi nan ren (ai=short)! ta bu shi nan hai (nan hai =boy)(shou =thin), ta shi pang(ta hen pang) zhe ge nu hai bu fu you(zhe ge nv ren ai ta bu fu you), zhe ge nu hai qiong ,wo bu shi nu hai (nv hai =girl), wo shi nu hai . ni bu fu you, ni qiong
ta bu shi ge gao nan ren ,ta shi ge ai nan ren .
ta bu shi ge shou nan hai ,ta shi ge pang nan hai .
wo bu shi gao yi ge gao nv hai ,wo shi ge ai nv hai .
You have done a good job .
But I think you'd better try to tye the Chinese character , and this maybe help for your study .
Well down. but there are something you must pay attention to. The adjective should put before noun.
zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. zhe ge nan ren bu gao, zhe ge nan ren ai! zhe ge nan hai bu shou, ta shi pang zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi gao nu hai gao, wo shi ai nu hai ai ni bu fu you, ni qiong
zhe ge（nu）nü ren nian ji bu da, zhe ge（nu）nü ren nian ji xiao.( ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!) ta mei you nan ren gao,ta bi nan ren ai! (ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang)ta bu shi hen shou,ta pang. (zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong)zhe ge nü hai bu fu you,zhe ge nü hai hen qiong. (wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai
)wo mei you nü hai gao, wo binü hai ai. (ni bu fu you, ni qiong) ye bu fu you, ye qiong.
You Write quite well:) just pay some attention to Chinese exepression. Go on!
nv ren ,not nu ren,nice job
ta bu bi nanren gao,ta bi nan ren ai. shi huancheng bi.
ta bu shi nan ren gao, ta shi nan ren ai!
zhe ge nan ren bu gao, ta ai !
这 个 男 人 不 高，他 矮 ！
ta bu shi nan hai shou, ta shi pang
zhe ge nan hai bu shou, ta pang.
这 个 男 孩 不 瘦， 他 胖。
wo bu shi nu hai gao, wo shi nu hai ai
wo shi ge nv hai wo bu gao,wo ai
我 是 个 女 孩 我 不 高， 我 矮
good! ‘ta bu shi nan ren gao’ ying gai shi :ta bu shi nan ren ,ta ge zi hen gao.
ta shi nan ren ,ta gao!ta bu shi nan hai ,ta shou!
zhe ge nu ren, nian ji bu da, zhe ge nu ren nian ji xiao. ta bu shi mei you nan ren gao, ta shi bi na ge nan ren ai! ta bu shi mei you nan hai shou, ta shi hen pang .zhe ge nu hai bu fu you, zhe ge nu hai qiong wo bu shi mei you na ge nu hai gao, wo bi na ge nu hai ai .ni bu fu you, ni qiong
You did very well,but there are also some mistakes in your content.such as "nv ren","bu bi " ........come on !in my view,chinse is more difficult than others.