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Spanish Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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En el parque, yo leyo un libro y escucho el canto de las aves y yo cantaba con ellos. Creo de mi amor que rompió mi corazón y lloro y tomo una respiración profunda.
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  • Rocío
    Mochapoints: 92097  |  Teacher Score: 38711 (96%)
    En el parque, yo LEO un libro y escucho el canto de las aves y yo cantO(you've written it all in present, why this verb in past?) con ellos. PIENSO EN EL amor que rompió mi corazón y lloro y tomo una respiración profunda(here I'd say "respiro hondo", but it's ok:P). Very good!! Have a nice day!!
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  • cristiannavarro...
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    yo leo un libro y yo canto con ellos.recuerdo el amor que rompio mi corazon y lloro y tomo una respiracion profunda,well I think that is the metaphor,at least I think so,go on Cristian
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  • Alejandra
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    ¡Hola, Bien! En el parque, yo leo un libro y escucho el canto de las aves, yo conto con ellas.
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  • alvaro
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    Hey Ann!! En el parque, leo libros, escucho el armonioso canto de las aves, y canto con ellas. Recuerdo a mi amor, que rompio mi corazón y lloro :( y suspiro. sigh* Go well
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