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Spanish Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2

Giving and Receiving

Instructions: Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

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Yo recibiendo un regalo desde mis padres. El regalo se envuelve en el papel de envolver rojo. El regalo es un celular plateada! Digo 'muchas gracias' y abriro el caja.
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  • Gilbert Ardila
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    yo recibi un regalo de mis padres. El regalo estaba envuelto en un papel de regalo rojo. El regalo era un celular plateado! Dije "muchas gracias" y abri la caja - this is in simple past yo estoy recibiendo un regalo de mis padres. El regalo esta envuelto en un apel de regalo -color (optional)- rojo. El regalo es un celular plateado. Digo "muchas gracias" y abro la caja this is in simple present
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  • jcarlos
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    Good but there might be more options: Yo HE RECIBIDO un regalo de mis padres. El regalo ESTABA ENVUELTO en papel de envolver rojo. El regalo es un MOVIL (We use this word in Spain but in South America everybody will understand "celular" ) plateadO! Dije muchas gracias' y ABRÍ LA caja.
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  • PENAGOS
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    Yo recibí un regalo de mis padres, el regalo se encontraba envuelto en  papel de regalo rojo.

    El regalo era un celular plateado, di las gracias y abrí la caja.

     

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