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Spanish Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 2

Daily Activities

Instructions: Using the words that you learned in this lesson, describe your activities during specific times of the day. Example: I brush my teeth before 7:00 a.m. I leave my house for work at 8:00 a.m. I go to sleep after 11:00 p.m.

ryuta's submission: Average Rating:
Mi comida favorite es la comida japones.
me gusta yakiniku, shabu-shabu etc...
ingredientes son carne de vaca y carne de cerdo para cocinar yakiniku y shabu-shabu.
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  • ESCOCES
    Mochapoints: 42969  |  Teacher Score: 19824 (87%)
    1) la comida japonesA, me.... 2) favoritA 3) Los ingredientes son .... MUY BIEN.
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  • Miguel Espinoza
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    Very good description. Though, besides the little details Escoces has already mentioned, i'll make some redaction corrections, so your description sounds more natural. Here we go: Mi comida favoritA es la japonesA. (There is no need to repeat "comida".) Me gusta EL yakiniku, EL shabu-shabu, etc... (This asumming the genre of the words are masculine). For the next frace i'll make a change in order, though the way you wrote it it's correct too, this way it's more natural: LOS ingredientes para cocinar yakiniku y shabu-shabu son carne de vaca y de cerdo. (Here we don't use article [el] for yakiniku y shabu-shabu. I know it's confusing, but it's long to explain. That tricky is the spanish).
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  • Rocío
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    Good :) I agree with Miguel Espinoza's comment
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