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Spanish Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 1

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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Las flores estan en sobre la mesa, y la comida es en la caja.
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  • Leonardo
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    Well done! [Las flores están sobre la mesa y la comida {está} en la caja] --> "en" is not necessary
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  • Emilio Camacho
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    Good !! only a few extra words: the "en" after "estan" and instead of "es" it should be "está" in the second part. Las flores están sobre la mesa, y la comida está en la caja.
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  • Rocío
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    Hi Ryuta!! :)

    It's quite well, but when we say where something is, we use verb "estar" instead of verb "ser", and you can say "en la mesa" or "sobre la mesa", but not both things :P

    So it would be:

    Las flores están sobre la mesa y la comida está en la caja.

    Well done :)

     

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  • Miguel Espinoza
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    Well everyone has already pointed the details, it's a good excercise, try to change the subjects "mesa" "flores" "caja". That would be a good practice.

    "La pelota está sobre la alfombra, y los zapatos están sobre la silla"

    Submitted over a year ago

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