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Spanish Writing Exercise

At the park.

Describe what you do at the park. Do you play sports? Do you read?

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glpr
Llevé mis hijos a el parque jugar. Remamos el bote, apreciamas vavias flores y sacamos las fotos.
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Submitted: 2008-10-29 16:37:31



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  • 2008-02-26 16:47:21
    Albert Bright
    congratulations! ¡Felicitaciones! Lleve a mis hijos a el parque a jugar. Remamos en un bote, apreciamos varias flores y sacamos fotos.
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  • 2008-02-26 16:49:46
    Albert Bright
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  • 2008-02-26 22:00:23
    CRY FOR THE \"T...
    i agree with Albert, but when it's a+el, it is contracted and appears as "al".
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  • 2008-02-27 03:39:11
    Alonso
    Lleve a mis hijos a jugar al parque. Remamos en un bote..... Puedes continuar la frase diciendo apreciamos/observamos/miramos varias/muchas flores y les sacamos/tomamos fotos. Es una sugerencia pero tu expresion escrita es buena.
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  • 2008-02-28 02:31:22
    xx4all
    muy bien.. sigue adelante :)
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  • 2008-03-20 10:19:16
    Celso.
    LLeve a mis hijos al parque a jugar, vimos varias flores y les hicimos fotos.
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  • 2008-08-22 20:18:44
    german hereira(...
    a jugar
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  • 2008-08-27 13:22:47
    Albert Bright
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    Great effort. Your correction are these: Llevé a mis hijos a el parque A jugar. Remamos un bote, APRECIAMOS VARIAS flores y tomamos algunas fotos.
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  • 2008-10-29 16:37:30
    Celso.
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    Remamos por el " lago, rio etc" no el bote Apreciamos no : observamos o vimos varias flores y les sacamos fotos. LLevé a mis hijos al parque, remamos por el lago, vimos varias flores y le sacamos fotos
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