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At the café.

Describe what you order at a café. What is your favorite drink? Do you order a sandwich or pastry?

I rarely go to cafés because I find the prices inflated and the quality deceiving.  If and when I am forced to go - for instance, to meet a colleague who is too "cool" to hold meetings in his / her office - I order a tea, which is, habitually, over-brewed.  I always order food, because I enjoy eating.  However, I am continually amazed at the capacity of businesses to offer quantity in the place of quality.

Submitted by astroborg on 2007-11-13 22:31:50.

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Chynna - 2007-11-14 00:48:07
Wow, you did a fantastic job! Your English is so fluent and vivid. You have a good opening and sound conclusion, which is to the point. You develop your point in cause and effect. You use correct financial phrases and a good example to support your argument. I enjoy reading your writing. Thank you so much for the great work. Best wish to you!

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CC - 2008-04-21 07:16:08
Hello astroborg,

Great job. You are obviously fluent in English...and absolutely fluent in American general culture. Good writing.

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