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Describing Objects

Describe a set of objects on a table. Describe another set of objects in a box. EX. The flowers are on the table, and the candy is in the box.

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freenebula
I'm working now. I'm very bussy and I'am working very hard. But if i can rest time I am looking Livemocha. I will go to Romania for work. So I must study English.
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Submitted: 2008-06-02 09:59:19



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  • 2008-06-09 21:50:06
    Terri
    If you are using a contraction (I'm) you don't have to use "am" you may use simply use I'm. Overall very well considering people who speak English everyday have poor grammar!
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